I try to make it through

[missmatilde]

I'm actually not really sure about this one... today most of classes I was writing something, so...it's really a draft and as it came, but I'd love some help to polish it up\find whato to keep or change... you all are always so much a part of what my songs are in the end, I love this board.
thanks in advance for reading! :-)

[a speedo model]

This felt a bit underwhelming, not terrible but nothing really stood out to me. Keep working on it though.

[missmatilde]

thanks Joshua (is that spelled right?)
I wasn't that sure about this... it was pretty much me being whinying and writing it down... but writing these made me feel much better, cause I was really pissed... so that's main reason I still liked it... I'm weird..

[OveriseFan]

thanks Joshua (is that spelled right?)
I wasn't that sure about this... it was pretty much me being whinying and writing it down... but writing these made me feel much better, cause I was really pissed... so that's main reason I still liked it... I'm weird..

It would be spelt right if his name was Joshua? :shrug:

It's "Josiah", a different biblical "J" name.

[missmatilde]

sorry Josiah... I suck with english names :blush:
thanks oversiveFan

[CellarGhosts]

I thought this was pretty good. Like Josiah said, it doesn't really stand out very much, but it's not what I'd call "bad." It just needs more work, overall.

[missmatilde]

what'd you suggest? ;-)... anything I should save\should really change? :-)
whenever u'v time;-)
thanks Chris :-)