Elevator Conversations

[missmatilde]

I know I kind of have a few pieces around, but I'm just in the mood... plus writing relaxes me... and you guys are nice... Thanks in advance for reading, please tell me what you think ;-)





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I know about I'll ever can not being right, but I just love how it sounds, but if you guys really hate it, I'll change it... sorry for mistreating your languace ;-)

[missmatilde]

no thoughs at all? you can laugh if you want :-)

[as_we_learn]

This was pretty good. Not as good as your last piece, but that's because this sounds more like a narrative piece. The flow still is good. Good Job.

[missmatilde]

thanks JR, it means much... also cause I normally can't really pull of the love subject without totally
sucking, I <3 u! :-)