Take My Heart Out

[liveloud4life]

Verse:
Grey outside, black within
Shades of silence, null and
Void. We're just like raindrops
That decided not to

Fall. We now concede to speak in
Monologue. We're talking to ourselves.
But no one can read lips that don't
Move. So say a

Chorus:
Prayer for alteration
Of our alternation.
Words and silences, switch, now, Simon says,
I speak, you speak, now, repeat after me,
Dear God, let me say that
I'm ashamed to say that
I've been letting go of letting you know.
Open my mouth and take my heart out.

Verse:
Where's the rhyme, the reason?
Pointless noise, and plug your
Ears. There's no incentive.
How can we repent with

Our mouths gagged and bound with duct tape
Cut and placed by our own two willing hands?
Remove this handkerchief I've put here
And I'll say a

Chorus:

Break (spoken):
A crimson sunset falls
On a cold, lonely horizon.
A gentle glow to thaw your soul,
Begging, pleading acceptance.

But the ground utters forth slowly
A sulking, silent steam,
A formless divide between dark and light
And a Godless underneath.

Breakdown:
Open my mouth
And take my heart out,
Take my heart out,
God, take my heart out.
I pray to God to help me
Pray to God.
To spill my soul out
In this prayer, this

Chorus:

[drummer1400]

this is crap and i hate you. die cracker.

[Deathfire578]

It's odd. Like, i'm not even remotely christian, but I like it. It's god a certain something to it. Keep it up.

[drummer1400]

I just want everyone to know that this man is the drummer for Here's to Fidelity. And he is awesome. And no, im not biased because im the guitarist for the aforementioned band.

[missmatilde]

I normally don't care so much for religious songs, but this one I liked ;-)
" But the ground utters forth slowly
A sulking, silent steam,
A formless divide between dark and light
And a Godless underneath." dunno way but I thought this part was really cool! :-)

[liveloud4life]

Thanx for the feedback. Im not used to getting very much. And really not much positive, lol. That's probably my favorite part too. Its like all the instruments are dropped out except for like some acoustic guitar and then the speaking builds to almost a scream at "godless underneath." Then the breakdown's like super heavy, all scream.

[liveloud4life]

I finished writing out the music to this song and I have a midi recording, no real one yet. Does anyone know if you can link a midi recording on a page?

[missmatilde]

upload it somewhere, then post the link :-)

[Period Piece]

I like this a lot, the flow is excellent. Good job!

[evalinelover]

this is crap and i hate you. die cracker.
this is kinda scary....but um ok...good luck gettin it sumwhere:music:

[drummer1400]

this is kinda scary....but um ok...good luck gettin it sumwhere:music:


haha that was a joke. He and I are in a band together so im alowd to say scary things to him.

[liveloud4life]

upload it somewhere, then post the link :-)

cool, thanx. ill see if i cant get it up somewhere. i hesitate cuz obviously u cant put words in midi, so there's just a tonal rhythm of a voice sound and its pretty low quality.

[evalinelover]

haha that was a joke. He and I are in a band together so im alowd to say scary things to him.

heyehy i was joking its actually areallly good song so keep up the good work...lol link it sum where!!! bye!:-D :wave: