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missmatilde
04/23/07, 11:53 AM
I finally settled for something I wrote around 'memories left on the sand' time and never came srounf to post... I really enjoyed writing these, and I have a sorta happy tune for it. :-)
hope this one won't suck, but, please, tell me if it does! ;-)
thanx in advance for reading! :-)

a speedo model
04/23/07, 12:25 PM
Hmmmm, this isn't bad but it just didn't seem to be going anywhere...it felt like a collection of ideas that don't really fit into a cohesive piece. But continue to work on it.

missmatilde
04/23/07, 03:08 PM
thanks for the support josiah, means a lot... I'll try to work on something that has more of a sense, but.. I'm overwhelmed by schoolwork while addicted to writing (that's you guys' fault! ;-)) and that doesn't help my natural randomness ;-), I hope someday I'll get there... :-)
thanx again!