untitled... this is just the beginning

[xxeuthanasia]

and then i grazed the gun against your open eye
your tears cascading down the barrel
your eye gazed into the loaded murderer
oh my-
if only i could pull the trigger


oh yeah and another part of some song or seomthing i thought of the other day...


it'll always be both of us
we'll always end
with a quiet scream
to the sky
(to the sky)


i have all my lyrics and poetry on my deviantart... black-rose-die.deviantart.com they're slightly depressing.

[Period Piece]

I quite like the first one, the imagery there is really good if a little cliched. The second isn't to my taste, but still not bad.

[xxeuthanasia]

thanks! idk im trying to escape the power of cliches.... but it's jus tnot working...

[xxeuthanasia]

well... anyone? please..?