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manican sex
04/28/07, 05:50 PM
i know this is old but i just posted this as "where the wild things are" up on myspace-- www.myspace.com/thecanarys (http://www.myspace.com/thecanarys)


lets make this count, for something more than this
I second guessed all the best parts

dark towers
shed no light
dark towers
shed no light
dark towers
are bone strucures of a widow in the moonlight

how long have we all been playing dead?
times another long chapter in my empty head
are we taking our time or is time taking us?
you cant be dead and the queen and but you can die and rust

you remember this fuckin voice girl, itll be in your dreams

smile girl, smile bright
this is what you call losing your life on prom night

I wish you could hear the words I'm about too forget
because im another lonly drunk with a chest full of regret
I'm all wrong , I'm all wrong and I never thought I'd write this song
these cigarettes know me better than I know myself and
I'm trying to remember if im sorry for everything I've said
but I miss that fact of missing the other side of my bed
even when i grow old she will still be there in my head

I'm growing up,
I'm growing old,
things will never be the same
things will never be the same
((chanted))
I'm growing old, I'm growing old



enjoy.

as_we_learn
04/28/07, 06:00 PM
"smile girl, smile bright
this is what you call losing your life on prom night"
Those were my favorite lines man. Ver good piece imo. Love the flow and the I could hear the vocals in my head. Good Job man

missmatilde
04/29/07, 01:38 AM
" how long have we all been playing dead?
times another long chapter in my empty head
are we taking our time or is time taking us?
you cant be dead and the queen and but you can die and rust" -->this I tot loved
but it was hard to tell which part I liked the most, cause it's all so good! if you ever put this song up, tell us, I'd love to hear! :-)

manican sex
04/29/07, 07:22 AM
"smile girl, smile bright
this is what you call losing your life on prom night"
Those were my favorite lines man. Ver good piece imo. Love the flow and the I could hear the vocals in my head. Good Job man

thanks man, yeah thats we use for the breakdown. getss intense.

thanks for reading though bro.

manican sex
04/29/07, 07:26 AM
" how long have we all been playing dead?
times another long chapter in my empty head
are we taking our time or is time taking us?
you cant be dead and the queen and but you can die and rust" -->this I tot loved
but it was hard to tell which part I liked the most, cause it's all so good! if you ever put this song up, tell us, I'd love to hear! :-)

glad you liked it. yeah if you dont mind shitty recording quality, itll get up eventually though.

thanks alot for readding.

-bub

hailthewarrior
04/29/07, 08:07 AM
i liked it.

missmatilde
04/29/07, 09:48 AM
glad you liked it. yeah if you dont mind shitty recording quality, itll get up eventually though.

thanks alot for readding.

-bub
don't mind :-) and it was really nice to read ;-)

lew_1987
04/29/07, 10:54 AM
i liked this quite a lot, but i couldn't really get it. as in... the way that you have divided the sections made it hard to read, and i didn't really get the sentiment(s) you were going for. I'm sure this gets ironed out along with the music. i liked the lines on their own, there are some really good ones but that was my only problem with it.

manican sex
04/29/07, 02:51 PM
i liked this quite a lot, but i couldn't really get it. as in... the way that you have divided the sections made it hard to read, and i didn't really get the sentiment(s) you were going for. I'm sure this gets ironed out along with the music. i liked the lines on their own, there are some really good ones but that was my only problem with it.

yeah the music brings it together. its an intense song about having the girl you really liked who you went to prom with end up leaving you at the dance. and you really never got over it for awhile. thanks for reading though man and maybe that clears some things up.

lew_1987
04/29/07, 03:07 PM
yeah the music brings it together. its an intense song about having the girl you really liked who you went to prom with end up leaving you at the dance. and you really never got over it for awhile. thanks for reading though man and maybe that clears some things up.

yeah, that does help a bit. thanks.

manican sex
06/04/07, 06:08 PM
Hey i know this is old but i just posted the song up on the myspace. its shitty quality but its dirrty and i like it. its labeled "where the wild things are"

the endsings a little different if you can tell

thanks for reading/listening

XxIronistxX
06/05/07, 05:36 PM
Its pretty good.