A Melody

[CellarGhosts]

This one is a bit different, as I decided the other day I wanted to start writing a few Irish/Celtic music influenced tunes, just since I love that stuff so much. I wrote this, it's short and sweet, and the lyrical style will be a bit different, a little more "folky" maybe, and "simple" to fit the music.
make sense? I hope so....anyway, enjoy...


A Melody

Well the stars are but dim, fading bulbs,
Hanging up in that crumpled sky.
The moon is but a sickle begging questions,
And only the ground replies.
Tonight the air is cool, as I lie here on the grass with you,
My lovely girl, beside the ocean blue.

[chorus]
Ya can ask the gnarled trees,
Or all the rooftops that we see,
They'll all testify that there's none more beautiful than you.
Oh ya can ask the moon,
He'll say what he can...
But in the end your beauty is something even the sea cannot understand.

[ArTkY_]

Fairly simplistic, but there's a beauty in the simplicity.

[CellarGhosts]

Thanks Tariq, and glad to see you back haha.

[ArTkY_]

Thanks Tariq, and glad to see you back haha.
You just want my positive comments, dude. haha, jk. Thanks man.

Seriously though, I don't remember the last time I read something from you that was less than good.

[a speedo model]

Yeah, the simplicity seems to work for it. Really nice, man.

[CellarGhosts]

Yeah, the simplicity seems to work for it. Really nice, man.
Thanks Josiah, I really appreciate it.

You just want my positive comments, dude. haha, jk. Thanks man.

Seriously though, I don't remember the last time I read something from you that was less than good.
hahaha, you caught me haha.

But seriously, thanks alot. It really does mean alot.

[lew_1987]

definitely works with the folky style, and its a good start

[missmatilde]

I really loved it, and the last line was so good! :-)

[CellarGhosts]

Thanks Lewis, and Matilde.

[lew_1987]

Thanks Lewis, and Matilde.

oooh Lewis, I feel so formal!!!

i just uploaded a shitty recording of me singing/playing a cover of thrice. could you give it a listen please man.

but seriously... you can call me lew or lewis, whichever

[CellarGhosts]

Haha, its cool. I just decided to call you "Lewis" for a change, as I usually say "Lew" haha...but anyway...

Sure, I'll give it a listen when I can. Earlier today, I was at my friends house, and was using the internet there, where she has high-speed, and Ive only got dial-up :-( haha...so whenever I get access to some high-speed (which should be pretty soon, as Im going to go to the local Lee's Inn parking lot and leech the high-speed there haha) I'll definatley check it out and let you know what I think.

[lew_1987]

Haha, its cool. I just decided to call you "Lewis" for a change, as I usually say "Lew" haha...but anyway...

Sure, I'll give it a listen when I can. Earlier today, I was at my friends house, and was using the internet there, where she has high-speed, and Ive only got dial-up :-( haha...so whenever I get access to some high-speed (which should be pretty soon, as Im going to go to the local Lee's Inn parking lot and leech the high-speed there haha) I'll definatley check it out and let you know what I think.

ok thanks. its a link to megaupload, ~4mb. i'm not sure how long that would take, its been so long since i had dial up, lol. anyways i appreciate it.

[CellarGhosts]

Ok, cool. And sure thing.

[as_we_learn]

it was great piece man. the simplicity worked well with this and i would love to hear the song. good job man

[CellarGhosts]

Thanks, JR. Really appreciate your kind words.

[as_we_learn]

No prob man. Do you have the music written on Guitarpro

[drummer1400]

Did you write this about any girl in particular? haha.

I like it man. Once again, I enjoy your use of figurative language.

[CellarGhosts]

Yeah, JR, I have music written on GuitarPro. I'll try and post a link to it soon.

And drummer1400 (sorry, dont know your real name yet haha) this wasnt written about any girl in particular, but at the same time it sort of was...if that makes any sense haha.
Thanks though.

[drummer1400]

Yeah, JR, I have music written on GuitarPro. I'll try and post a link to it soon.

And drummer1400 (sorry, dont know your real name yet haha) this wasnt written about any girl in particular, but at the same time it sort of was...if that makes any sense haha.
Thanks though.


Not written about a girl...yet written about a girl. That makes sense! haha.:).

For future reference-- the name's Logan.

[CellarGhosts]

Haha yeah, it's written pretty vaguely. I'm odd...haha
anyway, thanks Logan

[drummer1400]

Haha yeah, it's written pretty vaguely. I'm odd...haha
anyway, thanks Logan


I still enjoyed it nonetheless.

[CellarGhosts]

Cool, cool. Thanks man. I have a few more lyrics for the "irish punk" songs Ive written that I plan on submitting. Hopefully they'll be just as good.

[Period Piece]

It's all already been said. The simplicity works very well and really is beauty here. Great job Chris!

[CellarGhosts]

Thank you very much, man. means alot.
Tonight I'll try and upload some of these Irish-inspired tunes Ive written on GuitarPro, just for the hell of it haha.

[manican sex]

this was good. i like your pieces alot, but you proberly already know that.

-bubb

[CellarGhosts]

Thanks, man. appreciate it.