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FLØATING
05/04/07, 01:49 PM
People passing me by
I’m trying to hold it back
Your face everywhere I hide
I’m going to fucking crack


It’s your fault we didn’t last
Now you can be my tragic past
It’s your fault we didn’t last
Worthless peace of leftover trash


This game you played was genius
You know who you are
You made me fall for the perfect bluff
I went through it all and now I’ve had enough


It’s your fault we didn’t last
Now you can be my tragic past
It’s your fault we didn’t last
Worthless peace of leftover trash.



this is the first song i have ever written and i would love advice!!

a speedo model
05/04/07, 02:07 PM
Cliche. But continue to write, my first writings were a lot worse. Try developing your ideas in new and original ways.

FLØATING
05/04/07, 03:02 PM
alright thanks i guess its more on the poem side of things?