wixmmm
05/09/07, 04:08 PM
this is a new song i wrote...we have a cheap usb microphone recording of it up at http://www.myspace.com/prebar ... we're beginners with this songwriting stuff, but let me know what you guys think if you can.
"Come Tommorrow"
I've been thinking, as I've been sinking while I'm drinking
I relax, relapse, once more, maybe for the last time
I have claimed a first prize, cause now i realize
these things just don't die no matter how hard you try
I've been walking, slowly and so lonely
won't somebody hold me down because i'm going crazy
flipping out and screaming loud, said: "doctor can you save me now
I'm in dire need of anything" i beleive i'll conceive of something to make me
less insane, they say things will change in the coming days
so i'm finding ways to make a play and win the game hey hey hey hey hey.
(chorus)
and i don't know where i'll go come tommorrow
so i hold out hope, i'm looking for help from below, oh oh
I stop think twice and close my eyes, say a prayer at night
that this won't be the season for grieving, i don't want to find a reason
to even start thinking about giving in, yet satan grins, spitting sin
got me going around in circles again and again.
In my dreams he says to me: "I told you, it will enfold you, and it will get cold too.
nothing you can do or say, but run away to the next day"
but the hardest part of waking up is the part before the coffee cup,
when sleeps dreams still tease me and i beleive that they could be reality
but they're not and i reach for the pot and think alot
about the top headlines i read twice to make sure that i get em right
i guess the world fell apart last night
so i let myself unwind.
"Come Tommorrow"
I've been thinking, as I've been sinking while I'm drinking
I relax, relapse, once more, maybe for the last time
I have claimed a first prize, cause now i realize
these things just don't die no matter how hard you try
I've been walking, slowly and so lonely
won't somebody hold me down because i'm going crazy
flipping out and screaming loud, said: "doctor can you save me now
I'm in dire need of anything" i beleive i'll conceive of something to make me
less insane, they say things will change in the coming days
so i'm finding ways to make a play and win the game hey hey hey hey hey.
(chorus)
and i don't know where i'll go come tommorrow
so i hold out hope, i'm looking for help from below, oh oh
I stop think twice and close my eyes, say a prayer at night
that this won't be the season for grieving, i don't want to find a reason
to even start thinking about giving in, yet satan grins, spitting sin
got me going around in circles again and again.
In my dreams he says to me: "I told you, it will enfold you, and it will get cold too.
nothing you can do or say, but run away to the next day"
but the hardest part of waking up is the part before the coffee cup,
when sleeps dreams still tease me and i beleive that they could be reality
but they're not and i reach for the pot and think alot
about the top headlines i read twice to make sure that i get em right
i guess the world fell apart last night
so i let myself unwind.