Never Dead

[to kill this]

I've got to face this, I've been wasting every breath
just for the chance, just for the chance to see you again
Maybe I'm falling, Maybe I'm falling
even farther into the hole you left, you left

The sun seems so beautiful
When I know you're holding it up
At night, you rest; let the stars do their best
I wish on them cause it brings me closer to you.

I'll raise my arms high above my head
Waving at the planes,
cause that's what they've said
they told me you're alive,
up in the sky, no you're never dead

I just have to taste this; this world without you
Some days it's so sour and I watch
the clock for its magic hour
I close my eyes, wish for you by my side
I wanna tell myself it's someone else
and this is someone else's life
and this is someone else's life

I'll raise my arms high above my head
Waving at the planes,
cause that's what they've said
they told me you're alive,
up in the sky, no you're never dead

I place my hand over my chest,
Cause that's where they tell me
everyone lives when they go
but don't you know?
you're in every blade of grass,
every blooming tree that I pass
And I swear you're always gonna last
in this world and not just in my heart

I'll raise my arms high above my head
Waving at the planes,
cause that's what they've said,
they told me you're alive
up in the sky, no you're never dead

[CellarGhosts]

I thought this was pretty cool.
I'll try to give a better critique later...

[Period Piece]

I like this, some of the imagery is very good and great flow. Good job!

[CellarGhosts]

Ok, Im back...

I thought it was really good. The imagery was nice, the flow was really good, and overall it was a really cool read.
My only acutal "complaint" would be that some parts seemed a little awkward, but only certain words, etc, so nothing really drastic. If you really want, I'll take the time to point out which exact parts I feel need some work.
But if you're content with it as is, then you don't really need to change anything. So again, good job.