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greys1104
05/19/07, 10:36 AM
You've made me up.
Even after storms have ravaged upon me.
You didn't have to,
Yet you did.
Fixed me up.
So good with your hands,
But now they are upon her.

She doesn't need your fixing,
She's perfect-ly fine.
You've left this work,
halfway done,
and that's no way to be.

Little beads,ruby jewels,
Spill out my tongue,
onto its ebony assaulters.
And black smudges my eyes
after each encounter.

Cold metal touches my wrists
and ankles.
I'm forced to watch this film,
of you working on your latest masterpiece.
Why must you lock me up so?

Visions of you two
locked in a loving embrace,
intruded my dreams.
Penetrating my mind, heart,
and wrists.

Fallen_Tenshi
05/19/07, 05:52 PM
Cold metal touches my wrists

u stole my line.. >.> lol

greys1104
05/19/07, 07:15 PM
really??sorry krista. :] didn't know.

fortyparachutes
05/19/07, 08:10 PM
depressing and unoriginal.
the first is forgivable.

absent-minded
05/20/07, 09:05 AM
Hi Helena! =P

I finally made an account. xD

USA_Underdog
05/20/07, 05:27 PM
The thread title reminded me of that song by R Kelly "Trapped In The Closet" lol.

greys1104
05/20/07, 05:40 PM
The thread title reminded me of that song by R Kelly "Trapped In The Closet" lol.
haha.

black rose
05/20/07, 05:49 PM
The whole 'cold metal touching my wrists' thing is so...unoriginal and boring. Sorry.

absent-minded
05/20/07, 06:02 PM
The thread title reminded me of that song by R Kelly "Trapped In The Closet" lol.


Word..lol

greys1104
05/22/07, 04:21 PM
The whole 'cold metal touching my wrists' thing is so...unoriginal and boring. Sorry.
its ok.but that was cuffs/chains....not a razor.