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Alex Djaferis
08/18/03, 03:33 PM
another one i just wrote...comment :)

Follow the Leader

Advertise the adversary
Don’t let them feel at home
Plagiarise the slabs of stone
Read them out till they run dry

We’ll all follow suit
For we don’t like the truth
We’ll tear a grin give our best smile
Follow the leader

Don’t forget to feed us lies
Plate them in shining gold
We’ll take all you can give
Medicine dripping into a sieve

Into our greedy eyes
We’ll see what you want us to see
In the comfort of our own homes
We’ll watch the world go by

BuriedAlive
08/18/03, 03:40 PM
it was pretty good. i really think that the first line sucked. which kinda threw me off for the rest of the song. i think the first line has to be at a high quality. but this one wasnt. it could have been alot better. and would make this writing better also.

Alex Djaferis
08/18/03, 03:42 PM
yeah i was way hung up on that line, im trying to find something better...but i just wrote it and posted it without editing anything yet . so im with u on that. thanks for commenting.