Untitled and very much in need of help...

[ADecentDay]

MY jealousy hits like a swift blow to the head
Shocking and painfilled
It's too late now...It's too late...
Memories haunt me
It hurts to let go of someone you love
It hurts more to watch them love someone else
Punishment in love is so cruel and heartles
So are your actions
I dont if I can handle it, seeing you with her
A jagged cold knife to the heart is the feeling
Sorrow sings its bitter song
This is what I get

[xxMichaelxx]

Aight bro, first things first, it needs to be longer, it will be difficult to hold the listeners attention with only one stanza for a song. You need to elaborate more. Also, i think you meant to put the word know in the ninth line after the word don't. Good potential, just keep writing, you can only get better.