heres something new....

[BuriedAlive]

we write to soothe the pain
watch our idols die, it takes apart of me
every song sounds so cliche
my feelings, my emotion, that i poured into that song
they always change not one song is ever the same
we listen to what you all call cliche
but it brings back many memories
it helps to relate, though to you they all sound the same
"music mends broken hearts"
and we willl try to do the same
i wish i could find a different way,
to express the way i feel
to make it not sound cliche to your ears
im not changing for you
i will write the way i want
music feeds my mind, helps my soul
my pen shows you my life
this song is apart of me
just like all the rest
they might be considered cliche
but my feelings and emotions are locked inside,
inside the words, every word, different meaning

[proeuthanasia]

it could use a lot of work as far as flow and word-usage goes, but i like your message. revise it some, change a few words around, and see what you come up with.

[BuriedAlive]

i wasnt really trying to have good structure i was just trying to get that point across.

[xxMichaelxx]

it does get your point across bro. i stand behind you. fuckn posers in this place doesnt even know good music when it is right infront of them, literally

[xAlexisonfirex]

sorry dont feel like analyzing but that song sucks.

if you are going to try and get a point across go write a rant on a messageboard, don't post a rant posed as a song in a lyrics forum.

[DaneTheTrain]

I agree, do any of these songs you rattle of have music to go along with them, or are you just ranting?

[BuriedAlive]

alexisonfire are you mad that if i wrote a song about elephants i would still get more replys than any of your writings?

and yes dainthetrain all my songs except this one have music to it. this song wont ever have any, i was just proving a point. i thought you (dain) and alex would be behind me considering you write about the same thing over and over (or atleast what i have read)

and thanks mike.

[DaneTheTrain]

How the hell would you know that I write about the same thing over and over if I've only posted one of my songs? But since you bring it up, I'll post a new one today.

[xAlexisonfirex]

chris, the only reason you wrote this song is cause everybody ripped your ass for writing about the same thing.

seriously dude this isnt a song, its a rant.

as a song it sucks. as a rant it's ok you get your point across.

stop whining like a bitch everytime someone doesnt like your shit. and thats what it is.

you think i care about the replies and how many you get? 60% of your replies are people shitting on your songs, and the other 40% are you taqlking about how soo many girls think you are hot.

ive said it befor eill say it again, YOU ARE A COMPLETE DOUCHEBAG.

[DaneTheTrain]

DAMN...ya buriedalive, he just verbally kicked your ass.