five fingers

[antonioror20]

so here is a song i worked on..
im kinda happy with the lyrics..
here they are..

he closed his eyes,
as he said softly,
look at the things your love has brought me.
i wake up every morning and i say,
i've got everything, and that's you

18 youre the hit on my scene.
if you haven't noticed,
its a love thing.
the kinda love, that i could die for.
and though i would
id rather be alive for

i wanna give you my life
cause right now its all i have
youve got five fingers
and i wouldn't mind taking them

now im writing songs about her
how i need her and im nothing without her
and baby its good to see you
ill spend my life
and i still need you

ill write you an acoustic song
so you can learn the words
and maybe sing a long
when im away
and you miss me like now
oh i miss you right now

what do you guys think?

-jake