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DaneTheTrain
08/21/03, 03:18 PM
Well here it is, second piece I've posted. It looks kinda long but comes out to be around 3 minutes 30 seconds. Let me know what you guys think of it compared to my other. As always suggestion, critisizm and compliments are more than welcome.

"Search for the Switch"

Why does it seem its all come to this
Im stuck here alone with no hope to come to home to
Not even a home thatd I'de call my own
I have no address and no postal code

Where must I look
I'm stuck here searching
For something that doesnt exist
Some sort of truth - (Chorus, changes slightly each time)
Some type of person
or Some kind of constant
To be here for me...to be here for me

I miss so much and I wish that I didnt
I say that I hate you, but do I mean it
If I did why is it I miss you
And why does this piece of me still love you
I've got this idea, this thoery you see
That it aint you I want next to me
But rather that love, and false sense of security

I'm stuck in nuetral
Just looking for
Some sort of truth - (Chorus, modified)
Some type of person
or Some kind of constant
To be here for me...to be here for me

I look at my life like some sort of tunnel
I'm squinting for some sort of light at the end
But since my eyesights only 3 years good
All I see is darkness glarring back at me
Where is the light, the swith I turn on
That will shed pain upon my light deprived eyes
Im gropping the walls of this tunnel to find
The switch that will turn my life all around

Where is this switch
Why cant I find it
I feel as though
Its all in vain
This quest to find - (Chorus, modified)
Some sort of truth
Some type of person
or Some kind of constant
To be here for me...to be here for me

This tunnels filling up with this water
The water that floods at time of depression
And now I'm afraid I am gonna drown
Before I ever find that switch
Where is that switch
I'm dying here looking for that damn switch

That activates
Some sort of truth
Some type of person - (Chorus, modified)
or Some kind of constant
To be here for me...to be here for me

xxMichaelxx
08/21/03, 09:06 PM
in-fuckin-credible.

DaneTheTrain
08/21/03, 10:18 PM
haha, thx man...but what did you like about it?

xAlexisonfirex
08/25/03, 09:12 PM
its written well, but it seems like you are trying to be too epic and too great with it instead of just letting it flow.

you have talent use it. also if you are using an item like a "switch" try not to refer to it as much. you used the word switch alot.

unless of course you are hot hot heat then repeat all night long and your song will still rock.