Red Light, Green Light

[dotec3]

A little boy's poor attempts to try and sing for us
The endless bottles of alcohol and countless ciggerettes
Tattoos we show with pride and scars we'd rather not
Sleeping in and moving out just to waste the time we've got

Be strong
This is where we belong
Don't jump the gun and don't wait too long
You might trip over the trigger
And if the bullet flies its over

The lack of blood in my cheeks with winter numbing hands
And the abundancy I'd spill for you if just given the chance
Now I know that you have gone on to bigger and better things
But never forget who you are and what you mean to me

Be strong
This is where we belong
Don't jump the gun and don't wait too long
You might trip over the trigger
And if the bullet flies its over

Our vision of life is our gift to the world
So fill it up and toast to this present

[frankenduck]

wow, that' great. i think it's really good!

[dotec3]

thanks frankenduck
it makes me feel good that an abomination likes my lyrics
hehe

[XxIronistxX]

The lack of blood in my cheeks with winter numbing hands
And the abundancy I'd spill for you if just given the chance
Now I know that you have gone on to bigger and better things <<<<Favorite part
But never forget who you are and what you mean to me


Its good, but the chorus seems kind of weak. My advice is to either change the chorus or make the song longer.

[manican sex]

'Sleeping in and moving out just to waste the time we've got' was the only line i really enjoyed. its a kinda boring piece but keep it up bro and keep writting.

[zombiebrains]

i like the contrast between bloodless cheeks and winter numbing hands since well winter obviously makes your cheeks pink. 'nough said.