Roundabout

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Spin me around, arms intertwined
circles round roses, tripping on their vines
Ashes to ashes we all fall
we all fall, we all fall
(2x)

It's our unlived and unfullfilled
childhood fantasy, this dizzy dream
of you twirling me, your eyes burn my body
and my skin till it's thin, so thin
that you could kiss the veins
yeah you stain, yeah you stain

Spin me around, arms intertwined
circles round roses, tripping on their vines
Ashes to ashes we all fall
we all fall, we all fall

And when we get up,
will everyone have run away?
stick your hands out,
pick yourself up,
do you even have to say?
cause you speak in such a way
that your lips don't even twitch

Spin me around, arms intertwined
circles round roses, tripping on their vines
Ashes to ashes we all fall
we all fall, we all fall

Tommorow, same place, same time?
Forget yesterday's ecstasy,
and I won't carry mine
Hey, next week, next month, next year...
it wouldn't be the same nightmare
without you here

Spin me around, arms intertwined
circles round roses, tripping on their vines
Ashes to ashes we all fall
we all fall, we all fall (2x)

[CellarGhosts]

I thought this was relly good Sarah. I think my favorite part was the 6th stanza. nice job.

keep it up :-)

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thanks a lot! :))))

[CellarGhosts]

sure thing :-)

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i can't wait to put this to music :)

[CellarGhosts]

cool deal. think youd be able to post a recording of it with music once youve got it done?

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haha i could do it if i get someone to play for me...cause i still have to learn how to play guitar :P

[CellarGhosts]

ahh, I see.

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haha yeah. i can't wait though...ooohhh man. if not, i'll record acapella?

[CellarGhosts]

haha acapella would be fun. but youd have to pull it off just right, cause Id imagine thatd be tricky...or just find a friend who plays guitar to write music to if for you, and then you could come up with a melody.

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i already have a melody...i have it in my head when i write it, you know? but actually...acapella's always been easier for me...believe it or not. and true, to the friend

[CellarGhosts]

Yeah, it's weird, alot of the time, when I write a song, I'll get a melody in my head, and it'll sound really good to me, but I can never get it right whenever I try to sing/record it acoustically.

maybe its because I have a terrible singing voice haha

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yeah i know what you mean... but i'm not gonna lie, i have a really good singing voice haha

[CellarGhosts]

Ok, thats good haha. I wish I did :-D

[XxIronistxX]

This was really good. It flowed very nicely. Good job.

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aww thanks :)