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xidreamofyou32x
06/11/07, 10:30 PM
“Take Me Back”

Laying in the grass on a warm summer day
Just soaking up each other’s presence as we laid
Unconcerned with the outside world
Not knowing that our time was running short

And with every passing moment
Our dream slipped farther away
Precious second by second
Until it was way too late

Can you come here and sweep me off my feet?
Your arms around my body is all I’ll ever need
Take me away from this pain and suffering
Take me back to the day you said you’d always love me
Because I’ve been missing you in a million different ways
Why does Heaven have to be such a far off place?

They tell me it’s impossible
That I’ll ever see you again
They tell me I’m delusional
But I still keep hoping you’ll come back

Can you come here and sweep me off my feet?
Your arms around my body is all I’ll ever need
Take me away from this pain and suffering
Take me back to the day you said you’d always love me
Because I’ve been missing you in a million different ways
Why does Heaven have to be such a far off place?

A flutter of angel wings and you’re back with me
Tears soak my face and I try for you not to see
And as I’m down on my knees begging you to stay
You raise a hand to your lips and tell me it will all be okay

Can you come here and sweep me off my feet?
Your arms around my body is all I’ll ever need
Take me away from this pain and suffering
Take me back to the day you said you’d always love me
Because I’ve been missing you in a million different ways
Why does Heaven have to be such a far off place?

XxIronistxX
06/12/07, 12:54 AM
To be honest...its okay... but really cheesy. Keep trying.

thnksfrthmmrs94
06/12/07, 08:46 PM
very wow that's awesome but some of it *does half and half sign*