h0merg0mez
06/12/07, 06:16 PM
I've got a catchy little tune in mind for these lyrics, in the vain of Ben Folds. Just some little improvements or replacements would be handy and much appreciated...as well as a better title maybe? Thanks!
~VERSE UNO~
The future has arrived already
It’s come on strong and I’m not ready
Think I’ll take my lawnchair and pack it in
A thousand things that I could do
And none of them have to do with you
But I can’t get your cocky face off my mind
~PRE-CHORUS~
The days get longer
My skin keeps getting whiter, oh
~CHORUS~
What do I have to do to get a look in my direction?
I’ll never know
Can I say, “Look in my direction!”
~VERSE DOS~
I’ve got bad luck it seems
You’ve got a lot of nerve and I’ve got a lot of big dreams
I think I can live them out
But if I can’t - I’ll have to pack it in
And set up somewhere else
My hair gets longer
My face keeps getting whiter
~CHORUS~
~BRIDGE/END~
I met my future self one day
he said, “why did you make those choices?
what did I ever do to you?
Boy you gotta chuck yourself into what you want
You can’t let it come to you!”
And I said, “Fine”
And I spent the day inspired
Then the next day I laid around and ate donuts…
~VERSE UNO~
The future has arrived already
It’s come on strong and I’m not ready
Think I’ll take my lawnchair and pack it in
A thousand things that I could do
And none of them have to do with you
But I can’t get your cocky face off my mind
~PRE-CHORUS~
The days get longer
My skin keeps getting whiter, oh
~CHORUS~
What do I have to do to get a look in my direction?
I’ll never know
Can I say, “Look in my direction!”
~VERSE DOS~
I’ve got bad luck it seems
You’ve got a lot of nerve and I’ve got a lot of big dreams
I think I can live them out
But if I can’t - I’ll have to pack it in
And set up somewhere else
My hair gets longer
My face keeps getting whiter
~CHORUS~
~BRIDGE/END~
I met my future self one day
he said, “why did you make those choices?
what did I ever do to you?
Boy you gotta chuck yourself into what you want
You can’t let it come to you!”
And I said, “Fine”
And I spent the day inspired
Then the next day I laid around and ate donuts…