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06/12/07, 08:51 PM
this is a poem i wrote it's kinda meh....whatev read it and teel me what you think.
Numb
Why must I be what you want me to be, You want control I want freedom, I always feel so faithless and under continent pressure, I want to be what I want to be, You’re smothering me with your tight squeeze because you’re afraid to loose control, One day all my senses will go numb and you won’t be able to control me, Then what will you do, Just let me be me, I’m so tired of being what you want me to be, Never again you thought would you regret your thirst for control, You thought it was the right decision, Yet to me it wasn’t, Now I’m so numb I can’t feel anything around me, Why did you do this tome, Why did you let your thirst for power take over, Your disappointment in me is all the worse, I’m so tired but yet still I lay awake at night for hours on end, Waiting and waiting for you, I want you to take away the pressure, Encourage me and make my faithlessness disappear, But you’ve waited too long, Without you I went numb, You can’t feel me nor can I hear you, I can almost hear you strained cries trying to keep me alive, To save me from it, But you’re too late can’t you see, I’ve waited for you long enough, Now day after day you sit beside me regretting your crave for power over the week, For ever more you will cry in the dark corners of your mind, Trying to save the bits of me that are left, But alas you still don’t understand, I’m not here and never shall I be again, Numbness is what you and I feel between us, All that once known love and respect…gone, Condemned to a life long pain, Now do you see why, You can’t save me because…I’m dead, Gone from this planet for an eternity, So Now all you see of me is memories.
By: Amanda C.
Numb
Why must I be what you want me to be, You want control I want freedom, I always feel so faithless and under continent pressure, I want to be what I want to be, You’re smothering me with your tight squeeze because you’re afraid to loose control, One day all my senses will go numb and you won’t be able to control me, Then what will you do, Just let me be me, I’m so tired of being what you want me to be, Never again you thought would you regret your thirst for control, You thought it was the right decision, Yet to me it wasn’t, Now I’m so numb I can’t feel anything around me, Why did you do this tome, Why did you let your thirst for power take over, Your disappointment in me is all the worse, I’m so tired but yet still I lay awake at night for hours on end, Waiting and waiting for you, I want you to take away the pressure, Encourage me and make my faithlessness disappear, But you’ve waited too long, Without you I went numb, You can’t feel me nor can I hear you, I can almost hear you strained cries trying to keep me alive, To save me from it, But you’re too late can’t you see, I’ve waited for you long enough, Now day after day you sit beside me regretting your crave for power over the week, For ever more you will cry in the dark corners of your mind, Trying to save the bits of me that are left, But alas you still don’t understand, I’m not here and never shall I be again, Numbness is what you and I feel between us, All that once known love and respect…gone, Condemned to a life long pain, Now do you see why, You can’t save me because…I’m dead, Gone from this planet for an eternity, So Now all you see of me is memories.
By: Amanda C.