Before you leave

[to kill this]

have i ever told you all the things
that kept me tied down, like a bird on strings
unable to fly and wildly batting my wings
on my branch i'd gasp and reach up high for
air
never mind my silly ties, i know that you don't
care.

i've been living from lust to lust
trying to stick myself in someone else
leaving bits and pieces of me behind
so i leave a mark, so someone knows,
remembers me when I go

Have I ever told you about everything you live
without
when you're locked inside yourself
when others hold the key, i can't even unlock
me
they reach inside, restart my heart, squeeze
my lungs so i can breathe.

i've been living from lust to lust
trying to stick myself in someone else
leaving bits and pieces of me behind
so i leave a mark, so someone knows,
remembers me when I go

have i ever told you anything
or did it all just linger in the air,
in the awkward silence
when you'd run your fingers through my hair
and i'd pretend i didn't care
and guess what i don't really care because

i've been living from lust to lust
trying to stick myself in someone else
leaving bits and pieces of me behind
so i leave a mark, so someone knows,
remembers me when I go

i hope you know, i hope you know
that i'll remember this, i'll remember you when
you go.

[peacelovemusic]

You should post more of your songs. They are all very good.

[to kill this]

wow thanks. :) and i will, just for you haha

[4N6 science]

wow, ive read a few of your songs and im impressed...just a great song...and i really liked the chorus alot. do u perhaps write music to go along with your lyrics too?

[SLADE775]

This is horrible, please stop posting garbage like this.

[to kill this]

you are such a fucking asshole fuck off

[4N6 science]

This is horrible, please stop posting garbage like this.

yeah man thats not cool....ive tried to write songs and its very difficult. This girls obviously has some talent b/c she can write songs, so if you dont like it dont read it.

[SLADE775]

yeah man thats not cool....ive tried to write songs and its very difficult. This girls obviously has some talent b/c she can write songs, so if you dont like it dont read it.

Remove your head from your gaping asshole, learn how to type, then attempt to write a response.

[thegraveyard]

ok look, iv been to alot of ur posts slade, and everyone is pretty much the same, telling people how horrible their songs or poems are. look dont hate others cause u cannot write ur own song or poem...just shut up...really u have to stop. maybe u r a good song writer, i dont know...but shut up if ur gonna say the same thing everytime. u dont have to be an asshole cause u enjoy it...just really u have to shut the fuck up.

and by the way this song is really good...keep it up

[SLADE775]

ok look, iv been to alot of ur posts slade, and everyone is pretty much the same, telling people how horrible their songs or poems are. look dont hate others cause u cannot write ur own song or poem...just shut up...really u have to stop. maybe u r a good song writer, i dont know...but shut up if ur gonna say the same thing everytime. u dont have to be an asshole cause u enjoy it...just really u have to shut the fuck up.

and by the way this song is really good...keep it up

Ahahaha, this is the most retarded thing I have ever read. You've been to some of my posts huh? Hahahahaha, what an idiot. And you posted in my most recent "lyric" thread saying that you liked the song. You must be very stupid.

[peacelovemusic]

Ahahaha, this is the most retarded thing I have ever read. You've been to some of my posts huh? Hahahahaha, what an idiot. And you posted in my most recent "lyric" thread saying that you liked the song. You must be very stupid.

Stop being an asshole. If you don't care for the song you could just tell her, you know, uh, nicely? And you don't have to make fun of him because he was sticking up for people you've been a dickwad to. And with almost 41,000 posts in two years, I have one thing to say: get a life.

[SLADE775]

Stop being an asshole. If you don't care for the song you could just tell her, you know, uh, nicely? And you don't have to make fun of him because he was sticking up for people you've been a dickwad to. And with almost 41,000 posts in two years, I have one thing to say: get a life.

:lol:

[peacelovemusic]

:lol:

:efu:

[4N6 science]

Stop being an asshole. If you don't care for the song you could just tell her, you know, uh, nicely? And you don't have to make fun of him because he was sticking up for people you've been a dickwad to. And with almost 41,000 posts in two years, I have one thing to say: get a life.

hahahah peacelove music said it so beautifully, get a life!....way to spend your whole life on the forum slade....

[SLADE775]

hahahah peacelove music said it so beautifully, get a life!....way to spend your whole life on the forum slade....

39,000+ of my posts have been from work. You have Senses Fail in your user-name, you have no right to say anything to anyone ever.

[4N6 science]

ok whatever...this is a waste of time arguing...

[RememberFminus2]

ignore slade
he likes a band called mae

[OveriseFan]

hahahah peacelove music said it so beautifully, get a life!....way to spend your whole life on the forum slade....

There's no way you're 20...

No fucking way.

[to kill this]

okay soooo i know that this piece wasn't that good. and that guy's an asshole just all around. but yeah, senses fail = not so good. and comebacks aren't taken seriously when "u type like dis". i think that just about sums this all up. are we done now?

[SLADE775]

okay soooo i know that this piece wasn't that good. and that guy's an asshole just all around. but yeah, senses fail = not so good. and comebacks aren't taken seriously when "u type like dis". i think that just about sums this all up. are we done now?


So, you'll stop posting your insignificant, bullshit, anthems now....


Good.

[to kill this]

why are you such a dick? i said this in the other one...if you don't like them don't read them. end of story. it's all avoided. again, act like a 22 year old not a 10 year old.

[OveriseFan]

Oh my God.

You tell him to ignore your poetry, when you could just ignore his posts.

It's not hard to figure out. Ignore him, don't be hypocritical.

[peacelovemusic]

Oh my God.

You tell him to ignore your poetry, when you could just ignore his posts.

It's not hard to figure out. Ignore him, don't be hypocritical.

It's hard to ignore comments as critizing as his. Oh, and it also is even harder when he posts it over and over and over again.

[peacelovemusic]

39,000+ of my posts have been from work. You have Senses Fail in your user-name, you have no right to say anything to anyone ever.

Oh, then, okay. Let me rephrase that message. Get a useful job.

[ahumananomaly]

wow, ive read a few of your songs and im impressed...just a great song...and i really liked the chorus alot. do u perhaps write music to go along with your lyrics too?


I totally agree, this looks like some great lyrics, and I don't even write them, I write poetry. I'm beginning to like your work that you put on here a lot, it reminds me of what I write. Great song :-) :-)

[ahumananomaly]

why are you such a dick? i said this in the other one...if you don't like them don't read them. end of story. it's all avoided. again, act like a 22 year old not a 10 year old.

OWNED... lol sorry I just had to say it. Why does this guy always have to insult you when you didn't even do anything???? lol

[SLADE775]

OWNED... lol sorry I just had to say it. Why does this guy always have to insult you when you didn't even do anything???? lol

Owned eh? Wow.... I must say, of all the morons I've encountered in my time here at AP, the inhabitants of this forum really take the cake. None of you can even muster up what could be partially considered a decent "come-back" or "quip" of any kind. "To Kill This" should be banned on the grounds of posting some of the worst lyrics in history.

[SLADE775]

I totally agree, this looks like some great lyrics, and I don't even write them, I write poetry. I'm beginning to like your work that you put on here a lot, it reminds me of what I write. Great song :-) :-)

:rotfl: It never ends!

[thegraveyard]

Everyone, Y Dont U Just Completly Ignore What He Is Saying, Just Give Ur Opinion And Forget About Him....