so there's this song...

[wild_goose]

that i just finished with and i just recorded the chorus really quick. its kind of catchy in a way.. listen and tell me what you think. oh and i know i can't sing, sorry

http://www.geocities.com/gooseiswild/dizzy.MP3

i don't know if this should really go in a different forum, but i knew more people would see it and i would get more feedback in here. i'm not "promoting" myself, so yea.

the whole songs lyrics are:

i have the most perfect imagination
finding hope in places i've never been
feelings i've never felt
prizes i've never held
but now i'm standing on the edge
lean foward.. wait, no. step back
take a deep breath as the world spins
i'll remain dizzy and wait for your hand
"old enough to know what i want, too young to hold it"
well hold me now
we can make time disappear somehow
the sun will stop in the middle of its trip around
and the wind will pick us up
the stars will shine but the sun still won't rise
we can just stay ther between the day and night

[neb nawoc]

didnt work.

[DevilMayCare]

didn't work for me either

[wild_goose]

oh yeah i forgot.. geocities blows.

[wild_goose]

tripod.. ooo yes

http://sarahnienaber.tripod.com/dizzy.mp3

[NetNerdsRevenge]

that didnt work either

[wild_goose]

ha.. i'm giving up

[NetNerdsRevenge]

send it to me over aim

notonreplay

[vakkert_regn]

it worked for me but was pretty short

[Frodo]

Yeah it was short but sounded pretty good.

[Zack Attack]

u gotta copy and paste the first one.

[wild_goose]

ooo how tricky