Generations

[SLADE775]

Generations

You cite distractions
It's an easy way to cover clouded actions
Case and point - these hefty hallows
Like a house of cards in chicago
The mountains looks so plain to you
While I say this desert cloaks your view

Can you honestly say that you've seen enough?
You've lost your will and it shows
You said look out the window
Everyhting out there
Is now yours

Without much time
Without much left to offer
You describe your life
Like it's some cheap adventure novel
You don't have to coat your stories
With shells of facile glory
I understand - I'm old old enough to see why you did what you did

But can you honestly say that you've done everything?
That you wanted to
Was it all you had to prove?
You said once you've heard the news
Everything will change for you

Once you have something to protect
No matter what it is
You will understand what it means to live

[TheRedPlanet]

"Reading this was one of the worst experiences in my life".

[unwritten]

"Reading this was one of the worst experiences in my life".

Why did you quote yourself? haha

[thegraveyard]

ehhhhh...maybe

[SLADE775]

"Reading this was one of the worst experiences in my life".

The only reason you posted this is most likely because you're friends with that idiot "To Kill This" girl. And frankly, I find it amusing that you couldn't even muster up something on your own. Please exit this forum, we don't need any more moronic teenagers posting shitty, "heartbroken" (Oh give me a fucking break) lyrics.

[a speedo model]

I liked this. Nice work, man.

[SLADE775]

ehhhhh...maybe

So you go and change it after the fact, what a fucking fool you are.

[to kill this]

honestly, i didn't think that was that good. your rhyming was really forced as was the flow. you're not terrible, but i don't think you're good enough to be telling me i'm terrible.

[SLADE775]

honestly, i didn't think that was that good. your rhyming was really forced as was the flow. you're not terrible, but i don't think you're good enough to be telling me i'm terrible.

Run along now, get back to posting cookie-cutter nonsense about whatever boy you think is "hawt." You have no idea what you're talking about at all. The fact that I'm even responding to you is ridiculous.

[as_we_learn]

This is pretty good man. The rhyming in the begining felt forced, but I liked the rest of it a lot. The last three lines are my favorite. Keep it up man I likey haha. Oh yeah btw you misspelled adventure in that one line still good job man.

[senatorlamb]

lol Slade. I love how you cause drama wherever you go.

[thatwasamoment]

What? Slade? Talent?

[peacelovemusic]

Run along now, get back to posting cookie-cutter nonsense about whatever boy you think is "hawt." You have no idea what you're talking about at all. The fact that I'm even responding to you is ridiculous.

Christ, you fucking hypocrite. You can tell anyone you fucking want anything you fucking want and you act like everyone who tells you to cool it is an asswipe, but the second you are critized you think that it's wrong?

[Burnout2888]

Agreed with everyone else - the first verse seems somewhat forced, but after that it works well.

[kissbangkill]

the last three lines are very rocky v. circa waxwing. other than that, it's alright.

upon a second read.. the entire thing is like a lesser version of his lyrics. he's an amazing lyricist though, so i suppose that could be some sort of a compliment.

[goyoyofosoco]

It's not the worst thing I've ever read, by any means. See, I don't hate you. I just hate your superiority complex.

[SLADE775]

It's not the worst thing I've ever read, by any means. See, I don't hate you. I just hate your superiority complex.

Well I hate you..... so.... :shrug:

[SLADE775]

yeah hes got a point though bro. your poetry does suck. and you seem like quite the faget. maybe you should leave.

Dude, that's a chick. Hahaha

[manican sex]

honestly, i didn't think that was that good. your rhyming was really forced as was the flow. you're not terrible, but i don't think you're good enough to be telling me i'm terrible.

slades got a point though. your poetry does suck. if you start dikeing it out with one of your friends id gladly read your sex escapades. but for now stop writting shitty poetry you wrote while listening to paramore.

[manican sex]

Dude, that's a chick. Hahaha

i know i just found out and had to change my burn. were all good now.

[SLADE775]

hahahahaha