This is for me

[to kill this]

did you find what you were looking for
was it on someone else's lips?
did the mysteries of your life unfold
and solve themselves with her kiss?
did the stars come out and shine for you?
could you pick out the constellations?
"oh baby i see the little dipper too."
did the grass sway perfectly in the evening breeze?
was it a perfect picture, your body
pressed against hers on the green?

this is a song to remember all the good times
this is a song to remember why it wasn't right
sing along.

did you take her to your room?
did you lay in sheets that smelled like me?
it's a shame you give it up and away so easily.
did you ever pause to wonder
where you'll be in two years?
well baby you're still here.
and i've been lookin ahead, countin down
i'm gonna be someone.
bet you couldn't face that
i know i couldn't waste it and taste that
you grew so ugly makes it hard to remember
days when you were so beautiful

this is a song to remember all the good times
this is a song to remember why it wasn't right
sing along. sing along, yeah sing along.

i bet you know the words
let's play it again for her.
she needs to know
what you do and how you move
and how you inch your way
beneath the skin, until you're picking at the veins
i hope she knows,i hope she knows, i hope she knows.

this is a song and it's not for you
it's only for me to let go of what you do.
this is a song i'm gonna sing it as long
as it takes for you to go away.

[peacelovemusic]

I like it. With a soft arrangement and a guitarist strumming some minor chords, it'll be a beautiful song.
Or you can make it rock with some low key power chords and a drummer on speed.
P.S. If this is based of a true story, then it's some sad shit and you should go Maroon 5 style naming the album.

[liveloud4life]

You can seriously feel the anger in the words. That's gotta be a true story cuz it just bites too hard to not be actual feelings. Good job conveying emotion.

[to kill this]

thanks a lot guys :)

[yoyoninjagirl]

not bad