wanting nothing else

[thegraveyard]

title: Wanting Nothing Else

if i could choose only one thing
it would not be riches or to be king
i would want nothing but you

reaching out
finding what your about
felling you next to me
girl i just want you to see
id give everything for you
and do what ever you want me to do

believing you and what you say
i live for you day by day
there's nothing better for me to think
the love i hold for you wont shrink
lets run away together
and love each other forever

but if i could only have one thing
it would not be riches or even to be king
i would want nothing else but you

thinking of you when your not there
into your eyes i want to share
be with noone else but you
the feeling for you are true
id walk forever to tell you what i feel
cause the feelings i hold for you are real

iv searched for you, and found you
if only everyone knew
keep them away, the dont know
how the love i hold for you will always grow
iv found what everyone looks for
and if they find it they want more

but i would choose only one thing
and its not riches or to be king
it would be nothing else but you

always, always you} X4

but if i could choose only one thing
it wont be riches or to be king
i would want nothing else but you

(would want nothing else but you)
(Nothing but you)

only you, oh only you

but if i could choose only one thing (only one)
it would not be riches or to be king
i would want nothing
oh, i would want nothing,
no, no nothing else but you

(nothing else but you)

[a speedo model]

Ouch. This wasn't good. Sorry, but the imagery is cliche and has been done sooooo much. Nothing held my interest. :shrug: Continue to write though, it takes time.

[CellarGhosts]

the way I look at it, this would be good as just a nice little thing you could give to your girl as some sweet little gift or something, but as a song/poem itself, on a serious merit, its really no good.
cliche, and just really overdone.

so actually, look at it this way: would you rather woo your lady with the usual, run-of-the-mill stuff, or write something really original and impassioned?
I could imagine a girl would be much more impressed with the latter.

but contnue to write, as it does take time, and the more you practice, the better you'll get.
just be sure to take all the criticism you get seriously, and keep it all in mind when writing.

[SLADE775]

hahaha you are almost worse than that other broad.

[thegraveyard]

no no this is actually what it was for...lol i just felt likwe posting it to pass time.....it is not a serious song....but thanks for the honesty guys

[SLADE775]

no no this is actually what it was for...lol i just felt likwe posting it to pass time.....it is not a serious song....but thanks for the honesty guys

Suuuuuuuuuuuure.

[peacelovemusic]

I think it was sweet and considerate, but also the subject was cliched.

As a girl, though, I wouldn't be thinking Oh what a cliche if it were sang to me. I would be thinking Oh what a sweet boyfriend I have!