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tbs152
08/27/03, 05:38 PM
>>Relief After Rain<<

These stories come pouring like rain
Your feelings of hurt and pain
The dealings with boys past
Wondering if we're meant to last
A feeling so hard, looking for some armor for this heart
Protect me from this just bless me with your kiss
Broken hearts pieced together
A skin so soft as it covers her

Watch as we pull the daggers from our backs
Stories of our lovers past and what it is we lack
So just let it be me the one to make you happy

Nights together lead to fights for sleep
Morning sun rises, as we're setting
Holding you in my arms heaven
Just now realizing its seven this morning
Hoping this isnt the requiem
For a relationship not fully bloomed
A love not to be doomed

Watch as we pull the daggers from our backs
Stories of our lovers past and what it is we lack
So just let it be me the one to make you happy

This is the breakdown of the song
Reminders of a pain endured for too long
All those lonely nights and heart torn fights

So just let it be me the one to make you happy
I just wanna be happy, lets be you and me

Her touch is ever so subtle
A girl who loves to cuddle
The year past memories that wont last
The beer and wine made it all seem fine
The hurting that occured with you, the horrible things people do
Just let me clean your slate, deliever this a new fate
Promises I'll keep for you so take the leap

So just let it be me the one to make you happy
Kissing in these rains beautifully washes us of past pains
These scatered words on how are feelings in ink now


>>Suit Up Its Game Time<<

So she claims to be sick of this game that she plays
And wants to find a new one, he yells “try Russian roulette”
This is your last chance to place your bets its coming up on the right
Take your chances on who's car will be out front tonight

Do you remember the day we met?
Do you remember the first kiss?
Just you remember this,

No matter what you do
Forever I'll be dead to you
No matter what you do
Forever I'll be dead to you

Most people would kill for this
A love they’ll never want to miss
So its up to us, get this over with and end it quick
See the house go up in flames, eyes filled with tears
Washing them of your lies from the past year

Do you remember the day we met?
Do you remember the first kiss?
Just you remember this,

No matter what you do
Forever I'll be dead to you
No matter what you do
Forever I'll be dead to you

You come off as so delicate and petit
Soft and lovely, skin so white
A heart torn in a fight with what’s wrong and right
Let me go before you drag me down too
I refuse to go that way, drop dead and die at your hand
Just you remember this

No matter what you do
Forever I'll be dead to you
No matter what you do
Forever I'll be dead to you

So she claims to be sick of this game that she plays
And wants to find a new one, he yells “try Russian roulette”
This is your last chance to place your bets its coming up on the right
Take your chances on who's car will be out front tonight

(Do you remember it, Do you remember it?)

Your glamour has escaped you now
The look in your eyes tell the story of how
Washed up and alone
Your ways are something I don’t condone
Just write your letters, to people you lost
Was this all worth the cost (was this) was this all worth the cost



>>Corner Kick Goes To Red<<


I can see it in your hair disheveled
In your lips and words they don’t say
So I'll walk away, and let things be as they may
Hoping just to forget this day
Just leave you in the past
A hate that'll last

So spill your guts,
And tear your heart out, cause its all for kicks
Have the time of your life, cause its all for kicks

So you claim to be a friend
Yet you do this and bring it to an end
Is this how it’s supposed to be
Can’t trust you about anything
No one was to know of this
A claim reeled off her lips

So spill your guts,
And tear your heart out, cause its all for kicks
Have the time of your life, cause its all for kicks

This is the story of the boy in the corner
No one there just dreaming of her
All alone in the corner, all alone together
No one knows, no one knows
Its all for kicks, his friend just for kicks

Why did you even bother
Just befriend me to get to know her
Well this is just fabulous
Another poorly written story on lust
Friends no more, its over
At least you enjoyed her, (or so I heard)

So spill your guts,
And Tear out my heart, cause its all for kicks
Have the time of your life, cause its all for kicks
Just do it for me have the time of your life
This was all for kicks, all for kicks


so tell me what you think thanksand any suggestions

mikeduin620
08/28/03, 04:06 PM
nice work man. . .i really like suit up its game time. good shit.

tbs152
08/30/03, 11:46 AM
gracias

tbs152
09/02/03, 10:18 AM
bumpbumpbump it up

tbs152
09/10/03, 11:19 PM
to the top

tbs152
09/17/03, 11:10 PM
to the top

tbs152
09/25/03, 10:23 PM
to the top

tbs152
10/08/03, 09:23 AM
anyone else have anything to say about either one of these songs just looking for some feed back ideas anything thanks

tim237
10/09/03, 09:56 AM
just red the first 1 (pretty gud although i hate the word cuddle), i read the rest in a sec. just wunderin r u in a band or summit coz i wudnt mind listenin 2 ya

.Along4theride.
10/14/03, 04:50 PM
there alright....i think ur words rhyme too much and the word choice isnt to great......i like the watch as we pull daggers from our back....thats rad

Micah Aldridge
10/14/03, 08:32 PM
>>Relief After Rain<<

These stories come pouring like rain
Your feelings of hurt and pain
The dealings with boys past
Wondering if we're meant to last
A feeling so hard, looking for some armor for this heart
Protect me from this just bless me with your kiss
Broken hearts pieced together
A skin so soft as it covers her

"what rhmye is this? A/A/B/B/C/D/E/E??? You went Mad robert frost on this one did you not? TOO MUCH for an intro."

Watch as we pull the daggers from our backs
Stories of our lovers past and what it is we lack
So just let it be me the one to make you happy


pull the dagger from my back
(stories of our lovers past)
These feelings I have that you lack
(I'll be the one to make it last)

"You ever think your putting to many words in?"

Nights together lead to fights for sleep
Morning sun rises, as we're setting
Holding you in my arms heaven
Just now realizing its seven this morning
Hoping this isnt the requiem
For a relationship not fully bloomed
A love not to be doomed

"too many words? too descriptive? When you sing it do you have to stop for breath after every other line?"

Watch as we pull the daggers from our backs
Stories of our lovers past and what it is we lack
So just let it be me the one to make you happy

This is the breakdown of the song
Reminders of a pain endured for too long
All those lonely nights and heart torn fights

So just let it be me the one to make you happy
I just wanna be happy, lets be you and me


"BELETED"

Her touch is ever so subtle
A girl who loves to cuddle
The year past memories that wont last
The beer and wine made it all seem fine
The hurting that occured with you, the horrible things people do
Just let me clean your slate, deliever this a new fate
Promises I'll keep for you so take the leap

"lose cuddle, "beer and wine" line is tacky"

So just let it be me the one to make you happy
Kissing in these rains beautifully washes us of past pains
These scatered words on how are feelings in ink now


>>Suit Up Its Game Time<<

So she claims to be sick of this game that she plays
And wants to find a new one, he yells “try Russian roulette”
This is your last chance to place your bets its coming up on the right
Take your chances on who's car will be out front tonight

"Russian roulette line is hilarious"

Do you remember the day we met?
Do you remember the first kiss?
Just you remember this,

No matter what you do
Forever I'll be dead to you
No matter what you do
Forever I'll be dead to you

"ACK A/A/A/A???? Sam I am buddy, Sam I am"

Most people would kill for this
A love they’ll never want to miss
So its up to us, get this over with and end it quick
See the house go up in flames, eyes filled with tears
Washing them of your lies from the past year

Do you remember the day we met?
Do you remember the first kiss?
Just you remember this,

No matter what you do
Forever I'll be dead to you
No matter what you do
Forever I'll be dead to you



"again ack"

You come off as so delicate and petit
Soft and lovely, skin so white
A heart torn in a fight with what’s wrong and right
Let me go before you drag me down too
I refuse to go that way, drop dead and die at your hand
Just you remember this

No matter what you do
Forever I'll be dead to you
No matter what you do
Forever I'll be dead to you

So she claims to be sick of this game that she plays
And wants to find a new one, he yells “try Russian roulette”
This is your last chance to place your bets its coming up on the right
Take your chances on who's car will be out front tonight

(Do you remember it, Do you remember it?)

Your glamour has escaped you now
The look in your eyes tell the story of how
Washed up and alone
Your ways are something I don’t condone
Just write your letters, to people you lost
Was this all worth the cost (was this) was this all worth the cost



>>Corner Kick Goes To Red<<


I can see it in your hair disheveled
In your lips and words they don’t say
So I'll walk away, and let things be as they may
Hoping just to forget this day
Just leave you in the past
A hate that'll last

So spill your guts,
And tear your heart out, cause its all for kicks
Have the time of your life, cause its all for kicks

So you claim to be a friend
Yet you do this and bring it to an end
Is this how it’s supposed to be
Can’t trust you about anything
No one was to know of this
A claim reeled off her lips

So spill your guts,
And tear your heart out, cause its all for kicks
Have the time of your life, cause its all for kicks

This is the story of the boy in the corner
No one there just dreaming of her
All alone in the corner, all alone together
No one knows, no one knows
Its all for kicks, his friend just for kicks

Why did you even bother
Just befriend me to get to know her
Well this is just fabulous
Another poorly written story on lust
Friends no more, its over
At least you enjoyed her, (or so I heard)

So spill your guts,
And Tear out my heart, cause its all for kicks
Have the time of your life, cause its all for kicks
Just do it for me have the time of your life
This was all for kicks, all for kicks


"I like it"


"good job bud, Think about not rhyme'in so much,, Your not wanted to end up A/A/B/B/A like NFG are ya? I think not