Dont Let It Catch You Falling

[thegraveyard]

Ok os this is my first poem so anything is excepted

We spend our lives watching time fly by
not noticing where we are steering ourselves
we spend our days like we have nothing to live for
keeping the bad memories, throwing the rest out the door
what do you expect?
if we always live with regret
but dont let it catch you falling
keeping moving forward and quit the stalling

What can i say?
loosing a little dignity everyday
i make my choices and hope for the best
with life as the host and me as it's guest
I take the chances life throws at me
so maybe life will let me be
stand on your feet and quit crawling
keep moving, dont let it catch you falling

tring not to notic the pain people afflict
and everything else we restrict
what do we do if there's nothing left
should we go back or move forward
What do you expect?
if we always live life with regret
stand on your own feet and quit crawling
keep moving, dont let it catch you falling

how was it....and slade be free to tell me how much it sucks..cause i know it does..it is my first poem.

[SLADE775]

Look.... let me level with you, you're 16 years old and I think it would highly benefit you to hear this. Try to think outside the box. When you go to write a song or poem, make the topic somthing other than "girls" or self-loathing. Take a subject that you're interested in such as history, math etc. and attempt to form a song around it. For instance: If you look back a few pages, I wrote a song called "The Comstock" (We are rivers) which was inspired by my liking of geography and bodies of water/Rivers. I make abstract connections between people and rivers, I also describe a man's life in the piece. My ultimate advise is simple.... try to do something different. Just try, even if it's not something that turns out successful, it will be much better than endless ramblings about cliche topics.

[thegraveyard]

Look.... let me level with you, you're 16 years old and I think it would highly benefit you to hear this. Try to think outside the box. When you go to write a song or poem, make the topic somthing other than "girls" or self-loathing. Take a subject that you're interested in such as history, math etc. and attempt to form a song around it. For instance: If you look back a few pages, I wrote a song called "The Comstock" (We are rivers) which was inspired by me liking for geography and bodies of water/Rivers. I make abstract connections between the similarities between people and rivers, I also describe a man's life in the piece. My ultimate advise is simple.... try to do something different. Just try, even if it's not something that turns out successful, it will be much better than endless ramblings about cliche topics.

oh wow, i am surprised i must say...i was expecting something much worse. but thank you alot. this is honestly how u should speak to everyone. thank u for ur advice and i will take it...and i will look at ur peice...but thanks alot again

[SLADE775]

And another last bit of serious advise: don't type like that. People will instantly hate you. If you want to be taken seriously, just type normally.... trust me on this.

[thegraveyard]

ok lol thanks

[xidreamofyou32x]

I like it. But then again, I've posted a lot of poems here and not one person has liked any of them, so I might not be the best person to take advise from haha

[thegraveyard]

thatnks though..every one has their own opinions...and then again we are about the same age..probably around the same experience..evryone else is older lol...but thanks

[OveriseFan]

ok lol thanks

Slade, he completely missed your advice.

[thnksfrthmmrs94]

on the contrary that was pretty good but then again im really upsey cause i just had a fight with my gradparents they're total assholes={ i feel all crappy ok even though i've written about 35 poems(i haven't posted them all)that's probably better than a lot of mine(maybe not sure...yet)keep up the okish work

[TheRedPlanet]

Look.... let me level with you, you're 16 years old and I think it would highly benefit you to hear this. Try to think outside the box. When you go to write a song or poem, make the topic somthing other than "girls" or self-loathing. Take a subject that you're interested in such as history, math etc. and attempt to form a song around it. For instance: If you look back a few pages, I wrote a song called "The Comstock" (We are rivers) which was inspired by my liking of geography and bodies of water/Rivers. I make abstract connections between people and rivers, I also describe a man's life in the piece. My ultimate advise is simple.... try to do something different. Just try, even if it's not something that turns out successful, it will be much better than endless ramblings about cliche topics.

holy jesus christ I actually agree with u.about time some one realized that.maybe a holes have common sense afterall.

[thegraveyard]

look i personally think slade is a cool guy...iv said ity before he is just plain honest...and i was not expecting what he said lol...

[TheSkunk]

And another last bit of serious advise: don't type like that. People will instantly hate you. If you want to be taken seriously, just type normally.... trust me on this.\

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