Hedging Bets

[dude]

Let me tell you a bit about myself
I sure don't have it all figured out
God knows I've certainly screwed things up
Even though I'm loaded with good luck
One thing I know is I can't change the past
already drew cards, those di have been cast

lost my share of bets
lost a few fights
been in a doghouse
for a lion's share of nights

experienced some glory
went straight to my head
damn thing got heavy
couldn't pull it out of bed

lost my share of bets
lost a few fights
been in a doghouse
for a lion's share of nights

Let me tell you some more about myself
I know I'm not perfect, listen, can't you tell?
Finally decided to listen to you all
maybe it won't be like talking to a wall

lost my share of bets
lost a few fights
been in your doghouse
for a lions share of nights

not interested in glory
failure; no longer dread
fears are so silly
Get my ass out of bed

lost my share of bets
lost a few fights
maybe its not so hard
to do what is right

What do you guys think? Too cliche?

[dude]

I think this is kind of repeats too much, but it seems to work when put to music...I can put the tab up for it too if you guys are curious. Any thoughts at all on the lyrical content?