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TheRedPlanet
06/25/07, 10:25 AM
The title is lame but whatever...

Rooted in Soil

"Talk to your plants everyday and they will grow"
That's what is said
So i tell them of my daily excursions
Such as my trip to the bodega
When the cashier knew not a word of English

I told my coconut palm of that afternooon it rained so heavily
And a handsome stranger offered me shelter under his plaid umbrella

I sat from noon til sundown
Telling my infant bonsai of my many past loves, heartbreaks, successes and disappointments

When I sobbed over my deceased feline companion
Who will hear my tales no longer
I could almost swear one leaf wept fpr me
As a droplet of moisture slid down to its tip

I ponder nightly as I read by candlelight
Why my tales go unheard by human ears
Why cannot my potted pansies instead be a lovely brown eyed boy
Who will sit, listening wordlessly, gazing, at me affectionately
Why cannot my aged fern, whom I've had for many years
Instead be a girlfriend whom I've known since childhood
Who I will find solace in as we share melancholy stories?

"No this cannot be", I tell myself
So I sleep, the next day to awaken
Shower my friends with cool tapwater
Oh how I will mourn if see a wilted leaf
But so is life
Friends relocate, lovers have a change of heart
Just as leaves brown
And plants die

OveriseFan
06/25/07, 04:19 PM
Read your poems to your plants, not to us.

lew_1987
06/25/07, 04:43 PM
Read your poems to your plants, not to us.

james = pwner x 99

leezer
06/25/07, 05:57 PM
i liked reading this. it kept me interested and made sense

TheRedPlanet
06/27/07, 07:10 AM
Read your poems to your plants, not to us.

suck it. if u dont like it, why waste ur time commneting and making sarcastic remarks?

thegraveyard
06/27/07, 09:06 AM
she has a point...if u dont like something dont waste ur time saying how bad it is...help her, or anyone, how they can make it better or what they are missing...or what ever...but dont be an ass

lew_1987
06/27/07, 11:00 AM
she has a point...if u dont like something dont waste ur time saying how bad it is...help her, or anyone, how they can make it better or what they are missing...or what ever...but dont be an ass

i understand why theyre so tired of trying to help people.

thegraveyard
06/27/07, 11:48 AM
well yea alot of people do...people may not take advice but this is a place to share what u wrote and they tell them what they think and if they are so tired of saying what is wrong then they can just not write at all it is a simple as that...i mean comeon i got slade to give me advice and that is like tring to befriend the devil...not that ur the devil slade...

TheRedPlanet
07/03/07, 10:28 AM
bump