Let You Go

[xidreamofyou32x]

Here's something I wrote today. It's pretty straight forward. Comments would be nice.


“Let You Go”

Sunlight streams through these broken window panes
Illuminating the ghosts of yesterday
Your voice echoes through empty rooms
Among dark shadows your spirit roams
And when I try to rest your image burns my eyelids
And I wonder what awful crimes I committed to deserve this

I want so desperately to just forget you
Forget all your sweet temptations and our aspirations
When the memories begin to fade
You creep unwanted into my thoughts and invade my space
I never wanted to get in this deep you know
But oh it’s so hard to let you go

From this wood floor where I’ve been sleeping
The ceiling becomes a movie with a million scenes
I see that time in LA when we road our bikes through the crowd
And that moment under the stars when you took my hand and we spun around
I don’t want to remember the good times since they can never be repeated
No, they can never be repeated

I want so desperately to just forget you
Forget all your sweet temptations and our aspirations
When the memories begin to fade
You creep unwanted into my thoughts and invade my space
I never wanted to get in this deep you know
But oh it’s so hard to let you go

I just want to let you go
I just want to let you go
I just want to let you go
But oh it’s so hard to let you go

[thegraveyard]

i liked the imagry and the flow of this, it was nice. it was ok altogether.

if u r going to do something like this put a little twist into it...something unexpected. the reason: people do this type of thing all the time and it is ok. i wont lie i do it alot to (and they are probably no better). but just throw something into this type of things that can make it more intersesting.

[Balibus]

could be a bit longer...?

not bad...