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a speedo model
07/11/07, 07:07 AM
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=ZGSH441X
I did this a few weeks back, it's nothing amazing just something I did while bored. Not very electronicy which is odd for a recording by me, haha.
Also, I'd post the lyrics but it's like 4 lines haha. So I'll just let you figure them out.
thecurerocks182
07/11/07, 11:34 AM
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=ZGSH441X
I did this a few weeks back, it's nothing amazing just something I did while bored. Not very electronicy which is odd for a recording by me, haha.
Also, I'd post the lyrics but it's like 4 lines haha. So I'll just let you figure them out.
Firstly, you have to work on your production skills. The panning in this song made it incredibly difficult to listen to, and at times made me cringe. Also, the vocals are too low, and overwhelmed by all the sounds going on in the song. I think you have a good voice (better than mine), so turn that shit up lol. I think to make it more appealing you should focus the vocal panning to be centered, then have the guitar panned to the left and the keyboard panned to the right, but thats my opinion.
With everything else aside, I must say that the drums sound awesome. How are you recording drums, as I am envious. Anyways, I hoped any of this was of use.
PS - I'm still awaiting your comment on my song. I'm apologize for the constant reminders, but it is so difficult to get people interested in anything I do lately.
a speedo model
07/11/07, 12:48 PM
Firstly, you have to work on your production skills. The panning in this song made it incredibly difficult to listen to, and at times made me cringe. Also, the vocals are too low, and overwhelmed by all the sounds going on in the song. I think you have a good voice (better than mine), so turn that shit up lol. I think to make it more appealing you should focus the vocal panning to be centered, then have the guitar panned to the left and the keyboard panned to the right, but thats my opinion.
With everything else aside, I must say that the drums sound awesome. How are you recording drums, as I am envious. Anyways, I hoped any of this was of use.
PS - I'm still awaiting your comment on my song. I'm apologize for the constant reminders, but it is so difficult to get people interested in anything I do lately.
Yeah, I tend to not be confident in my voice so I keep it low. haha, but I will work on the production. Thank you greatly for the good feedback.
I am ashamed to say the drums are a loop I made using FL Studio haha. Its sound is excellent though, I'm happy with that.
Oh, sorry! I couldn't download it until this morning because my internet's been so slow. But I have it and will listen right now. Sorry for taking so long, man.
manican sex
07/12/07, 04:37 PM
i liked the train in the middle but the song really didnt have a focus. but yeah the voice sounded decent use that more. your music is very scattered and random and maybe thats how you want it but i get lost at times listening to it. keep it up though cuz each songs has a cool part in it.
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