quickSXTneon
09/04/03, 10:11 PM
Empty eyes led me to see
You're blind and will never believe
So crush my dreams
Cause they don't mean a thing
Then stand back and watch me bleed
Gasping for a breath
Inside this hollow place
running from these echoes
Of lines you scream the best
I was thinking of the "gasping for a breath" part could be like a chorus or something. I like it all it all fits my theme, just the first part and 2nd part shouldn't be the same verse at least. I kinda like it I'm gonna try to continue it tomorrow, i've got a list full of questions i wrote to make me think of more stuff so i'll see what i com up with, I just wanted an initial it sucks or it's okay so far response.
Mike
You're blind and will never believe
So crush my dreams
Cause they don't mean a thing
Then stand back and watch me bleed
Gasping for a breath
Inside this hollow place
running from these echoes
Of lines you scream the best
I was thinking of the "gasping for a breath" part could be like a chorus or something. I like it all it all fits my theme, just the first part and 2nd part shouldn't be the same verse at least. I kinda like it I'm gonna try to continue it tomorrow, i've got a list full of questions i wrote to make me think of more stuff so i'll see what i com up with, I just wanted an initial it sucks or it's okay so far response.
Mike