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lifelesslove
09/07/03, 11:07 AM
Haven't posted anything in awhile, but here's a new piece, hopefully people will get the meaning of the song....

"Wear It Well"

I didn't think you had this in you. Your a creature, and my curse. And when you'll portray a result, wearing dark clothes to match a black soul. We display eccentric fashion, we're new and up to date... but the inner heart, and our divine human, we've only grown to hate.

The line to lost intentions, define a porcelain runway, as you crack the floors with en vogue shoes, and an inner force you hoped to hide. You yield a passion, close your lips, and pass into a dulling sense. "smile for the cameras, and hope they don't impair you, flash just like an instant reminder, and take you back to when."

*Chorus*
Then you fold like designer clothes, fit your outfits like your feelings, then place them into drawers. We always wanted spotlights, and we always stole the limelight, but when you lose your sponsors, you wilt like a weeping heart (when you had one, and now your nothing)...face first on the ground, and we feel just like the sky we're falling..."you're a darling, when you wear updated fashion".

She sits, head bowed, on the train, riding from town to town (guy to guy) spreading her intent...the nature of this mission wears well in her head, the first to lie gets the majority of the prize...and we all watch her from corrupted eyes...she's so beautiful..."spare your breath, your too happy, way too happy."

Completely barren in a chair burning her away in a light she always wondered never followed. Pen arched, he jots down answers that will only delay interests for months, and he nods in agreement. "what did she mean, her structure demeaning".

*chorus*

your as shallows as this puddle , the tears you wished you cried, now draining you of sympathy... now making you comply.

xforgetdecember
09/07/03, 11:16 AM
Wow. Dude.. awesome lyrics.

lifelesslove
09/07/03, 11:53 AM
thanks man, i didn't think that was that good...it was just bunced in my head for a long time about this topic of how fashion can make you such a great person, and how you lose your heart through it. please give me more comments....it's never completely revised

lifelesslove
09/09/03, 01:25 PM
PLEASE READ THIS SONG, and at least tell me if you get the meaning of what i'm trying to entail with the lyrics to see if i should make it more easily understood, or at least tell me if you enjoyed it...

BuriedAlive
09/10/03, 02:59 AM
damn man, i cant say im impressed because i always expect something of such a high quality from you. but i did get what you were trying to say most in the chorus. but i havent read a bad song by you, you are one of the most talented writers. and i enjoy reading every song you post on ap.

Alex Djaferis
09/10/03, 04:25 AM
real good man.

lifelesslove
09/11/03, 10:13 AM
thanks guys, it's really not hard to comprehend, it's about a model who wears expensive clothes and everybody who doesn't matter says they love her, but she has nothing but a black heart, nothing cares about her, she cares about no one...I'm really hoping it's not that hard to understand...and since I only am going to post once a week cuz of college, i hope i get alot of comments to this one for a little while...i'm now going to


BUMP

BUMP

BUMP IT UP...my song, of course.

Rufio217
09/15/03, 07:28 AM
sad thing is i can almost relate to the song about losing your heart after a make-over just to impress others.


the song wasn't to shabby, i know you tend to make a lot of comments about how people write like there favorite bands, and there were some instances where certain bands were present in this song...but i liked it.

lifelesslove
09/15/03, 01:05 PM
granted, i say alot of people just take most songs, and reword them from your favorite bands, but sometimes it shouldn't be apparent, most styles have been modeled...

Thursday:sincere, words flash between politics, and love of aesthetics, and flashy breakdowns

Thrice: recent rhyme scheme, and it adds a deeper element to writing

Coheed: Crazy lyrics ,that with alot of introspection

SaveS the Day: dreamy, underlying elements to most lyrics

the beautiful mistake: hold a hardcore twinge, alot of use of the heart, loss of love....

pop punk bands use alot of regret, and still caring, fallout boy does it best...

I don't put my song into any of those categories, i've really never seen a song taken like this one before....

but it is true, rufio 217 got it best, that you shouldn't change your look for anyone, that the way you are is the way you are for a reason...don't change...and with obsession with looks, you lose alot of introspective thought on the fact that you are you...for a reas0n

lifelesslove
09/19/03, 12:36 PM
i'm going to keep bumping this song until I get a new one next week


BUMP

proeuthanasia
09/19/03, 01:19 PM
it's ordinary. some lines are excellent, but, overall, the song's shine becomes subdued beneath your obvious attempts to produce deep and unique lyrics. work on the song, a few of the lines make no sense, do not flow, do not convey what you're trying to say. don't try to find them. let them come.

OctoberNights
09/22/03, 10:34 AM
really REALLY good