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tbs152
09/14/03, 03:55 PM
These past two weeks
I've been drinking, my breath it reaks.
But you still sneak in,
All my dreams at night
Waking me like the twilight of dawn
And it kills to know youve, youve moved on

This is the outline of everything
(your everything to me)
This is the outline of everything

So I'll listen to "Konstantine"
And remember you kissing me
And wake to it being nothing more then a memory(memory)
Writing and thinking
Does nothing to ease this pain and missing

Summer leaves turning brown
All the while falling down
Upon our heads miles away
Missing you this autumn day

The perfect tree, a story of you and me
A picture perfect summer,fallen(falling down),down

This is the outline of everything
(was this meant to be)
This is the outline of everything

Blank lines on this page
Messages Im trying to convay
So are these the college rules
Play like youve got no one to lose
But you lost me or I lost you
You say its what you must do

This is the outline of everything
(you and me is it just a memory)
This is the outline of everything

So I'll listen to "Konstantine"
And remember you kissing me
And wake to it being nothing more then a memory(memory)
Writing and thinking
Does nothing to ease this pain and missing
Its nothing more then a memory(memory)
A memory(memory)


let me know what you guys think
tbs152
09/25/03, 10:07 PM
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lifelesslove
09/26/03, 09:15 AM
tbs, that is one really, really emotional heart-felt song. I really enjoy this song. Usually, i wouldn't like stuff like this, a little to simplistic, but it really gets the point across. It may help that while I read it, I was listening to the new early november, and that kinda reminds me of their lyrics, but I enjoy it a hell of alot. I like the part where you say "So I'll listen to Konstantine, and remember you kissing me, and wake to it being nothing more than a memory." It's really heartfelt, i don't know if it really means anything to you, but this is how I feel about being without my girlfriend for a few days. Man, this song really hits home, thank you for it...I love this song
OctoberNights
09/27/03, 03:41 PM
i like the idea of it but some of the lyrics seem like you tried way to hard to rhyme or sumthin....let it flow
tbs152
10/05/03, 04:29 PM
wow thanks lifelesslove best review i've ever gotten thanks man awesome to hear you really liked the song
steveo1022
10/07/03, 06:38 PM
thats awesom. u did really good with that. i can really relate to that and am sure many others can. there were no major problems with it in my opinion. the strong point was deffinatly how easy it was to relate to. u did really good with showing your emotions in that. all my props go out 2 u. good luck.
steveo1022
10/07/03, 06:43 PM
thats awesom. u did really good with that. i can really relate to that and am sure many others can. there were no major problems with it in my opinion. the strong point was deffinatly how easy it was to relate to. u did really good with showing your emotions in that. all my props go out 2 u. good luck.
Blondiepunkgirl
10/18/03, 02:45 PM
This so is great. it really shows a lot of emotion and it seems easy to relate to. i really loved this part: "Play like youve got no one to lose, But you lost me or I lost you, You say its what you must do" you are really good at writting down your feelings into a good song which is something i wish i could do. you've got talent, just keep writting.
tbs152
10/25/03, 09:04 PM
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jk livin
10/26/03, 06:43 PM
that rocked. i like it a lot
AllThingsGrey03
10/27/03, 07:21 AM
I think it's awesome. I like it a lot. It flows really well too. My favorite lines were ... "These past two weeks I've been drinking, my breath it reaks.But you still sneak in, All my dreams at night Waking me like the twilight of dawn And it kills to know youve, youve moved on " and " So I'll listen to "Konstantine" and remember you kissing me and wake to being nothing more than a memory" nice job!