Adam and Evil

[Evilvillin]

"Adam And Evil"

Heart Shattered
Tears falling
why did this happen
i loved you, you loved me
you always seem to break my heart
why me, why now, why
I loved you right from the start

One love, one wish
forever you promised
forever i stand
forever you swore
forever didnt last
now you shove me out the door

This blade
my wrist
it is you i missed
now i lay no more in pain
in this coffin
crimson with a blood red stain

three words i utter
Take me back
the pain i feel when its your love i lack
My heart is dead!
my blood runs cold
Take me back

I hit the floor
blood flows more and more
this blade my throat
can anyone save me from this hell
my Heart is Dead!
my blood runs cold
here i lie
your not there and here i die

[Brandon Allin]

You've got to be fucking kidding me. Self-harm isn't cool, get that through your fucking head.

[lew_1987]

"god created adam and eve, he didn't create adam and steve."

[Evilvillin]

dude i dont fucking cut or harm myself its just how i felt its not like i would actually do it, get that thru ur fucking head

[a speedo model]

:appl: This is why I don't post lyrics anymore. There is no substance, no original thought or metaphor, nothing interesting. Thing such as this are what is killing this forum, I blame you.

[TK]

dude i dont fucking cut or harm myself its just how i felt its not like i would actually do it, get that thru ur fucking head

Oh god, I could say so many things right now...I just say this.

1. Writing about something you don't mean is ridiculous. If you never been in love, don't write about love. If you've never done drugs or drank alcohol, don't write about that. If you've never been depressed or suffered from depression, don't write about that. And if you've never cut, for God's sake! Don't write about cutting! And I am by no means saying cut yourself so you can write about that. The point is, don't fake the words because you think they sound cool, or whatever.

2. Don't force rhymes everytime you get the chance.

"you always seem to break my heart
why me, why now, why
I loved you right from the start"

3. Uh, forget it. You will probably argue with the other two, so why make a third point, ha. Dude, there's some good work in this forum, but this isn't it.