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NoseBleed
09/17/03, 09:04 AM
Dance in misery

Leave me bleed here alone
Dry your eyes amongst the sheets of make-believe
This is your fantasy the way you Imagined it would end
Me dying in your arms the sky lifting us up into the distance
are you disappointed? or glad that its all over now? now that I'm gone far away

Now your dancing in misery
while I watch over you through your eyes
your prayed for this day to come
you waited forever for this moment
now its here your tears aren't worth anything anymore
Now that you must go on without me

Cry through your evil eyes
Fool everyone while you pretend to hurt
Everything around you reminds you of that day
When you stole the sun from my eyes and replaced it with tears
Are you satisfied? Is it what you hoped for now? now that your dancing in misery again

Stop praying for forgiveness
Live with what you've done
you can scream right through me
Until your last breath runs out

Dance in misery
Fold the corners in this chapter
and dance until you disappear
now

I would hope for some feedback wheather critical or positive comments, I just want to know what you think about my song and way of writing it. Much appreciated :P