kinda weird

[punk_sk8chick]

ok,this is something i wrote a long time ago,and i know it sucks but i thought i would post it because I'm like wicked bored so here it is............

You always have something to say,even when no one wants you to speak
Why do you taunt people with the things you know???
Just what does that go to show???
The fact that you sink so low to get what you want.
Fine go making everyone else suffer while you laugh silently in the back
The things you lack is the ability to care about others,and to take the covers off and let others in.
You should learn to discover the mysteries in your self before you go searching in others.
Outside that cover you have a real life, Go look for you self


lova
kauri

[OveriseFan]

Don't post in here because you're bored. A select group of us take writing seriously, and if you do, great, then post. Don't clutter our forum with nonsense though.

[punk_sk8chick]

ya know what,I,like alot of other people are self conscious about their writing,and i on the other hand,will rarly post my writing even if i think its good or not,and the only way i do post my writing is if im bored that way im not feeling as if im saying my writing is good or not,and i do take writing seriously,its a big part of my life,the thing some people need to realize is that it takes alot out of some people to post their writing and some people take it really hard when someone says somthing ignorant and rude....but im not like that all im going to say now is thank you for stating your opinon and i take it into huge consideration.

Lova
Kauri

[wyverna]

Just out of interest. If you "know it sucks", then what sort of response were you hoping to get?

[punk_sk8chick]

when i post something i don't look or hope for any certain type of response,if and when i post,its mainly because I'm bored,and even then i look for people who actually took time to read something i wrote and tell me what they really think,i appreciate everything someone says about something i write. So to answer your question in a very simple answer is, I dint look for any kind of response.


lova
Kauri

[a speedo model]

Don't waste our time. If you know it sucks and aren't looking for feedback then piss off. This is a small place on AP, where a few of us have gotten to know each other and give criticism to each other's work in an attempt to better our writing. It's insulting to come in, clutter this place with garbage, admit it's garbage, and say you weren't looking for feedback.

[a speedo model]

Bored people go to myspace, people looking to better themselves as writers come here. You must have taken a wrong turn somewhere.

[de la sympathie]

Bored people go to myspace, people looking to better themselves as writers come here. You must have taken a wrong turn somewhere.

Precisely. And if you aren't prepared for harsh criticism, or ready to have your work critiqued, or aren't serious about coming in and posting, then this isn't the place for you.

[punk_sk8chick]

no,you guys are not getting what I'm saying here,i don't care if people hate it,and if they do i want them to tell me,i do post things here to get feedback on how to make my writing better,and i didn't mean to come off saying i think my writing sucks the thing i do is i write, i didnt say any of my writing sucks because every thing i write is very important to me,and has special value to me,and i am ready for harsh criticism,thats what i want if people say anything at all.you guys my be right and maybe i shouldn't be here,but your only 2 or 3 people that i don't know and never will,your comments are important to me but no matter what anyone says it will never get me down,so go ahead say what you want and i will take it into consideration,so yell scream throw a fit,just remember if your goal is to get me down,its never going to work.


lova
kauri

[punk_sk8chick]

Don't waste our time. If you know it sucks and aren't looking for feedback then piss off. This is a small place on AP, where a few of us have gotten to know each other and give criticism to each other's work in an attempt to better our writing. It's insulting to come in, clutter this place with garbage, admit it's garbage, and say you weren't looking for feedback.
i'm not wasting your time,last time i checked i did not make you click on the link that lead you to this and i did not make you read this,so please do not blame me for something i did not do. I did not wast your time.


lova
kauri

[anamericangod]

please stop posting "love kauri" after everything you write. this isn't a love letter or a thank you note.

[King of Town]

no,you guys are not getting what I'm saying here,i don't care if people hate it,and if they do i want them to tell me,i do post things here to get feedback on how to make my writing better,and i didn't mean to come off saying i think my writing sucks the thing i do is i write, i didnt say any of my writing sucks because every thing i write is very important to me,and has special value to me,and i am ready for harsh criticism,thats what i want if people say anything at all.you guys my be right and maybe i shouldn't be here,but your only 2 or 3 people that i don't know and never will,your comments are important to me but no matter what anyone says it will never get me down,so go ahead say what you want and i will take it into consideration,so yell scream throw a fit,just remember if your goal is to get me down,its never going to work.


lova
kauri

Then you'll never improve. But really, you can only go up from the stuff you're writing.

And for a "writer" (I use that term loosely), your grammar is horrible. The space bar is BELOW the keys.

[King of Town]

no,you guys are not getting what I'm saying here,i don't care if people hate it,and if they do i want them to tell me,i do post things here to get feedback on how to make my writing better,and i didn't mean to come off saying i think my writing sucks the thing i do is i write, i didnt say any of my writing sucks because every thing i write is very important to me,and has special value to me,and i am ready for harsh criticism,thats what i want if people say anything at all.you guys my be right and maybe i shouldn't be here,but your only 2 or 3 people that i don't know and never will,your comments are important to me but no matter what anyone says it will never get me down,so go ahead say what you want and i will take it into consideration,so yell scream throw a fit,just remember if your goal is to get me down,its never going to work.


lova
kauri

Stay strong, Sister!

[punk_sk8chick]

Bored people go to myspace, people looking to better themselves as writers come here. You must have taken a wrong turn somewhere.
and i dispise of Myspace,i think its a violation of peoples lifes,its not that i dont think people shouldnt have a Myspace,i just dont want to have one


lova
kauri

[King of Town]

and i dispise of Myspace,i think its a violation of peoples lifes,its not that i dont think people shouldnt have a Myspace,i just dont want to have one


lova
kauri

Changing the subject, much?

[punk_sk8chick]

please stop posting "love kauri" after everything you write. this isn't a love letter or a thank you note.
sorry,with pleasure.

[TakingBackDowd]

you suck.

lova
dowd

[punk_sk8chick]

Changing the subject, much?
no,i was commenting to something someone else wrote

[King of Town]

no,i was commenting to something someone else wrote

You're right.

I'd post more, but I have to go look for my real self outside this cover. :-D

[punk_sk8chick]

you suck.

lova
dowd
thank you much appreciated, but the whole A at the end of Lova is something that is very special to me and i put it there for a reason

[punk_sk8chick]

You're right.

I'd post more, but I have to go look for my real self outside this cover. :-D
thats funny, joke all you want. I wrote that because it has something to do with people very close to me, but seriously, and I'm not being sarcastic, I am glad you find what i wrote entertaining

[King of Town]

thats funny, joke all you want. I wrote that because it has something to do with people very close to me, but seriously, and I'm not being sarcastic, I am glad you find what i wrote entertaining

Thank you.

Lova Dub Dub (Three Men In A Tub),
King of Town

[punk_sk8chick]

Thank you.

Lova Dub Dub (Three Men In A Tub),
King of Town
no problem, and i would say Lova Kauri at the end but i cant i was politely asked not to

[ArTkY_]

ahahahahaha, fantastic

[a speedo model]

no,you guys are not getting what I'm saying here,i don't care if people hate it,and if they do i want them to tell me,i do post things here to get feedback on how to make my writing better,and i didn't mean to come off saying i think my writing sucks the thing i do is i write, i didnt say any of my writing sucks because every thing i write is very important to me,and has special value to me,and i am ready for harsh criticism,thats what i want if people say anything at all.you guys my be right and maybe i shouldn't be here,but your only 2 or 3 people that i don't know and never will,your comments are important to me but no matter what anyone says it will never get me down,so go ahead say what you want and i will take it into consideration,so yell scream throw a fit,just remember if your goal is to get me down,its never going to work.


lova
kauri
What? In this very one you start off by saying you know it sucks.
i'm not wasting your time,last time i checked i did not make you click on the link that lead you to this and i did not make you read this,so please do not blame me for something i did not do. I did not wast your time.


lova
kauri
I slippery defense. You post this in an open forum, it is implied that people should read or at least have to make the decision to or not to read it. So if you post a writing that sucks of your own accord, I will very well blame you for putting a topic in the list that was a distraction that drew me out, made me look and read it. Thus wasting my time.

If you are here to learn, great. Welcome.

[OveriseFan]

Josiah lays down the pwn.

Hahahaha.

[wyverna]

ok,this is something i wrote a long time ago,and i know it sucks but i thought i would post it because I'm like wicked bored so here it is............

no,you guys are not getting what I'm saying here,i don't care if people hate it,and if they do i want them to tell me,i do post things here to get feedback on how to make my writing better,and i didn't mean to come off saying i think my writing sucks the thing i do is i write, i didnt say any of my writing sucks because every thing i write is very important to me,and has special value to me,and i am ready for harsh criticism,thats what i want if people say anything at all.you guys my be right and maybe i shouldn't be here,but your only 2 or 3 people that i don't know and never will,your comments are important to me but no matter what anyone says it will never get me down,so go ahead say what you want and i will take it into consideration,so yell scream throw a fit,just remember if your goal is to get me down,its never going to work.


lova
kauri

???

[OveriseFan]

???

Yeah. I think Josiah called her out on that too.

She's an idiot, we have to let it go, I suppose.

[wyverna]

Yeah. I think Josiah called her out on that too.

She's an idiot, we have to let it go, I suppose.

I decided to add quotes to reinstate his point.

More and more idiots seem to be posting in here lately :/

[ArTkY_]

The idiots are what make this forum interesting.

[a speedo model]

Naah, amazing writers do. And I think we have some here.