Reality Sinks The HMS ( A Symphony of Sympathy )

[RomanceIsSoDead]

Reality Sinks The HMS ( A Symphony of Sympathy )

Theres a part of me you would never run to
Guess what love? I was always in there
I can't erase my heart, because it was never written
But the verse I dreamed up was really a curse
A symphony of sympathy, is that what you expect?
My songs aren't tragedys, they are glimpses of hope

When you bleed dry, What and how will you cry?
You have no choice, dry your eyes, say goodbye

I killed myself over and over again, what have you done?
When my father looks at his son, all he sees is a corpse
Dried and burnt in the sun, rotted and unable to run

When you bleed dry, (I can not wait till you do)
What and how will you cry? (Then I'll wish I could see you)
You have no choice, dry your fucking eyes, say goodbye

All that light I saw in you, the will to fight
It was a lie, a fucking disguise, but I swear to try
To make something outta my life

I don't need an alibi

I've been reborn

I no longer have to die

All because of you

Ha.

I've let go

[xmy.only.exitx]

it doesnt have good flow and there are many grammatical errors.still keep writing.

[mattybobviously]

There's no flow, and I think a few people have written songs about bleeding and crying. If you want to get good, force yourself to not write about love/girls until you've improved, then you can tackle that subject and sound a hell of a lot better.