Was it just angst?

[Anne.Frank]

Intro
Verse 1
I’ll keep faking my own death ‘til I dare pull it off
Maybe you’re next in line
To witness it all
I simply can’t get it out of my head
I need to, though
I need to

Verse 2
Some day, I guess, I guess I’m ready to live
Awake in every moment, not wanting out
A plan for every soul, every life
Reconsidering
Reconsidering it all

Chorus
Leave it all; just leave your things behind
Go to a different place in your mind
Clear your thoughts and think of what is left
Left to do, or think, or experience
There’s no need for you
There’s no need for you to do so

Verse 3
It’s as sad you make it, don’t blame it all away
It seems I’ve come to realize
I’m here to stay
It’s relieving
It’s relieving to say

Bridge
I’m sorry for everything
I tend to forget every word that I’ve said
Don’t know what I’m supposed to say
Sorry for thinking about you

Chorus
Leave it all; just leave your things behind
Go to a different place in your mind
Clear your thoughts and think of what is left
Left to do, or think, or experience
There’s no need for you
There’s no need for you to do so

Outro
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I'm gonna do a recording some day, perhaps you'll like the song better if you hear the music and my vocals... :)

[a speedo model]

I dunno, I just didn't like this at all. Flow and imagery were just uninteresting. Keep at it though.

[Anne.Frank]

I dunno, I just didn't like this at all. Flow and imagery were just uninteresting. Keep at it though.

Oh, okay... thanks for the response anyway.

[kait.]

this didn't do anything for me. it's just - words. i can't feel any emotion.

[mattybobviously]

Your diary was to a much higher standard.



Agreed with the above, didn't really do anything for me.

[CellarGhosts]

I agree with the poster who said it was "just words", because I didnt really get any emotion from it either.
sorry...but keep at it.

[Jaster]

Cliche, boring, annoying, bad.

[Anne.Frank]

Well, at least I can sing really well. I can only hope I'll write something as good as my vocals :P