goth songs

[burnt-images]

if looks could kill then dead i'll be
i carry a cerated knife
for when the world is too much for me:skull:
i can quickly end my life

in the dark i wait for her return
i clutch a glistening blade
soon thje table starts to turn
shes hacked up raped and slayed:chainsaw:

steal into the graveyard
on this raven black night
nail her rotting coffin shut
to stop the dead arise:fudd:

lock her in this dungeon
commit her to the tomb
the smell of fear is pungeant
eyes accustom to the gloom

here she meets her DOOM.:devil:

NOTE: please don't judge me as a goth, psycho, rapist, necrphiliac, emo, or weirdo because of this song.:viking:

[OveriseFan]

Ok, didn't read it. (Because I know it's terrible) but what's with the little smiley guys?

[mattybobviously]

This is so poor.

[TK]

Ok, didn't read it. (Because I know it's terrible) but what's with the little smiley guys?

I don't know, the smilies made me laugh, ha.

This is so poor.

Agreed. I didn't like any of this, sorry.


Btw, if either of you guys have the time, I'd appreciate hearing feedback on my new piece from either of you:-)

[kait.]

i'm inclined to say the smilies are the best part of this.

[a speedo model]

Fake account. Not funny.

[ArTkY_]

haahahahahahhahaha, this is definitely a joke.

[burnt-images]

i am not a fake account:redlove:
the song is in fact a lousy joke, im sorry if anyone is offended
PS: don't hate me because of this song:nono:
PPSS: don't bag my other songs just because you hated this one.:kiss:

[CellarGhosts]

huh?

[TheOtherAndrew]

to stop the dead arise:fudd:
haha