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Alex Djaferis
10/11/03, 05:12 AM
comments welcome as usual :) enjoy (i hope)

Next Exit: Utopia

Hold my hands and follow me
Lets find us a new paradise
Through dead worlds we will run
Into the setting sun

I can’t promise anything
I don’t even know the way
All the maps are upside down
And the road signs point the wrong ways

But I know we’ll find a way somehow
There is no chance of getting lost
With dreams and hope as our guide
We’ll drive into the night

Hold my hands and follow me
Into a brand new paradise
Where poisoned minds die at the sight
Of loving hearts and honest eyes

We’ll stay together till the end
Sincerity and honesty will prevail
These lands will burst with justice and truth
And lies will be myths and tales

All the maps are upside down
All the road signs point the wrong way
But with dreams and hope as our guide
We are sure to find our way

TheFallenScene
10/11/03, 12:24 PM
Wow..I really like this song man. Good job.

Alex Djaferis
10/12/03, 08:15 AM
thanks

Rufio217
10/12/03, 10:58 AM
Originally posted by PeeDster

Hold my hands and follow me
Into a brand new paradise
Where poisoned minds die at the sight
Of loving hearts and honest eyes

We’ll stay together till the end
Sincerity and honesty will prevail
These lands will burst with justice and truth
And lies will be myths and tales

All the maps are upside down
All the road signs point the wrong way
But with dreams and hope as our guide
We are sure to find our way


unargueable the best part of the song, it seems that the second half of your song is stronger than the first. personally I liked it but it seems the first half could be re-enforced to make it more solid as the second.

Rufio217
10/12/03, 10:59 AM
Where poisoned minds die at the sight
Of loving hearts and honest eyes




I also really like this line alot....it just seems very powerful ad meaningful, and cool...

Alex Djaferis
10/12/03, 11:56 AM
thanks alot for the input rufio. v cool. yeah the second part is better i agree...i may fiddle around with the first sometime.