My December Bride

[..: Loki :..]

November's come and gone,
December came so quickly
it's already the third.
The eleventh will soon be here

SHE DIED LONG AGO
TO BRING ME BACK TO LIFE

I hate this month
it's too damn cold,
and the frost penatrates the heated walls
of this tired apartment

when I wake up
I can still feel her fingertips,
warm,
touching my skin,
her sent stained my sheet

you all spoke to me softly
as she smiled and waved and left.
And she drove fast to scene of the accident

I drive and drive
and I cant seem to find the palce
where I left the person I used to be

[kait.]

i would have liked you to go further with this - i don't think it really went anywhere. it was basic. too brief for any emotion. i nearly felt you wasted words in places. but i do adore this:
I drive and drive
and I cant seem to find the palce
where I left the person I used to be

[CellarGhosts]

no offense, but the part about "she died long ago..," comes off as really corny. idk, maybe cause it's in all caps...so maybe chaning that would make those two lines less awkward.

otherwise, this isnt terrible, and you're showing some potential here, I just think you need to work on it.