Suicide...after you

[kornintee]

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[Micah Aldridge]

Holy Shit! Dark, Morbid, Spooky! Not my style!...... ;) Don't think I will be redo'ing this one, but you got your point across effectivly.

[kornintee]

yeh it was the night after i broke up with my dream

then i remembered she lost me

[Micah Aldridge]

Wow, you even talk like a poet ;)

[kornintee]

:D dat n a gangsta.... werd...

[The Nephilim2]

you should have killed yourself instead of writing this pile of shit

[MaybeOneDay]

No offense, it was a good effort I guess, but I really don't like this one. Your other song is alright though.

[Jim Morgan]

pretty good, but really to dark and morbid, especially after breaking up with someone... no offense.

good tho, just not a preferable style of mine.