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Twikki
10/27/07, 06:18 PM
[verse1]
this violent past collides with future
this bloody heart comes to a pause
she'll never know what she means to me
i love her

[chorus]
well they say that a best friend
is just the person you'll offend
i guess that position is mine
you got yourself into this mess
all you had to say was yes
but you got a boyfriend instead

[verse2]
she gave me the right signs
they went in the wrong direction
god manipulated me in his game
i lost my faith

[chorus]

[verse3]
well take care of my former lover
i'll wake up in a pile of piss
despising you and awaiting your death
i guess the better man won
(that was me!)

[chorus]

[interludex2]
if i had the cure for a broken heart
i'd take an overdose

[bridge]
i'll find her face down on the floor
bathing in blood and bruises
hate to say i didn't warn her
people never change
on the inside

[chorus - on an acoustic]

thetrueblood
10/27/07, 09:17 PM
not good.

Twikki
10/28/07, 04:57 PM
not good.

constructive criticism?

nbaontcty
11/01/07, 08:44 AM
i like it.

you should go to counceling.

j/k

but you seem depressed.

I like it alot though!