My Shorts On Fire!

[yournewhaircut]

Okay this is going to be my repository for rather short lyrics that I come up with.
If you are interested in anything posted... well sweet.
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Daily Dairy

I.
Girl cheese...
Please?
But-t, But-t-t,
... I love you...

II.

Daddy drank
all mommy's milk.
"Baby's hungry!"
"Give the kid a beer.

"Drnksseemm in?"
"Make daddy proud."

Oh the udder's aim.
Oh the utter shame.

[apoemtothedead]

Please don't put out the fire.

[CellarGhosts]

hahahahaha

no...

[yournewhaircut]

The Shepard Gets a Bill From the Blacksmith

Black sheep,
Gold tooth.
Lie to me another time.

Cell phone ringing,
Birds and bees singing,

"Hide away!
High away!
Look at me!
You're my best friend."

Hide away!
Hide away!
Look at me.
You're my best friend.

[a speedo model]

Fake.

[yournewhaircut]

Fake.

????????? I'm not sure why you might think that exactly, considering there doesn't seem to be anything "fake" about the pieces I am presenting. But if it's not the pieces you're concerned about, but my actual-factual account then I guess this paragraph disproves your judgment. Unless I'm mistaken about the world "real", usually if you can ask about it, it means that you yourself are real. Obviously I am real. If you would actually like to argue that I am fact not real, please be my guest.

[CellarGhosts]

i can has cheezburger?

[a speedo model]

????????? I'm not sure why you might think that exactly, considering there doesn't seem to be anything "fake" about the pieces I am presenting. But if it's not the pieces you're concerned about, but my actual-factual account then I guess this paragraph disproves your judgment. Unless I'm mistaken about the world "real", usually if you can ask about it, it means that you yourself are real. Obviously I am real. If you would actually like to argue that I am fact not real, please be my guest.
My reason for saying this is simple. Your pieces are jokes, I gave you the benefit of the doubt thinking it was purposefully. I would very much like you to, if you are in fact a real person writing these with real intentions for real feedback, tell to me how the ones you've posted should be taken seriously.

[yournewhaircut]

My reason for saying this is simple. Your pieces are jokes, I gave you the benefit of the doubt thinking it was purposefully. I would very much like you to, if you are in fact a real person writing these with real intentions for real feedback, tell to me how the ones you've posted should be taken seriously.

You're already taking them seriously enough.

I guess I'm making a comment about art with them.

In the first bit I'm asking if ideas about the "stellar"-ness of love are directly tied to physical, base desires. Or maybe I'm pointing out that they are tied. The thing is I really don't know myself.

In the second bit I say that people's psychological problems stem from the problems of their parents. I used the "Dad" as an example from our society where drinking and such can be a right of passage.

I kind of prefer to let them stand by themselves as much as possible though.

It's alright to call it garbage and forget about it. I don't think there's anything I can say to prove you should take any of this work seriously unless you have your own personal reasons to.

I do appreciate your feedback though. I don't mean to come off as snooty about this.

[a speedo model]

You're already taking them seriously enough.

I guess I'm making a comment about art with them.

No, I'm taking this forum seriously. Thus, being offended by trash posted in here.

In the first bit I'm asking if ideas about the "stellar"-ness of love are directly tied to physical, base desires. Or maybe I'm pointing out that they are tied. The thing is I really don't know myself.

In the second bit I say that people's psychological problems stem from the problems of their parents. I used the "Dad" as an example from our society where drinking and such can be a right of passage.

Bullshit, I'm calling you out. That's bullshit.

I kind of prefer to let them stand by themselves as much as possible though.

Stand on what, the gibberish?

It's alright to call it garbage and forget about it. I don't think there's anything I can say to prove you should take any of this work seriously unless you have your own personal reasons to.

I do appreciate your feedback though. I don't mean to come off as snooty about this.
Don't make this about people brushing your work off and not taking the time to understand it. Don't insult the people who have read this by implying it's too deep for them or they're not taking enough time to understand your gibberish.

I'm still sure this is a fake account, I'm merely responding because I'm bored.

[yournewhaircut]

I really don't know what you mean by "fake" account. Unfortunately, I can't completely agree with your scrutiny. Hopefully you will like something I post in the future. Perhaps I can have the pleasure of reading/responding to your work as well. I will try to learn a better artfulness of form.

[CellarGhosts]

"Drnksseemm in?"
"Make daddy proud."

Oh the udder's aim.
Oh the utter shame.


....seriously, what does this even mean?

[yournewhaircut]

I kinda tried to make it (drnnksseem in) one of those phrases which is two phrases at once.

It's supposed to say "drinks seem in" but, from a person just learning speech... it's also supposed to be offensive and incestual... since the same pronunciation could say "drink semen", as a way to make a disdainful tone and give another example of the degradation of morals (or whatever) that seems to be part of "growing up".

I think "daddy" can be seen as a metaphor for the self-destructive way of acting that is seen as cool... a divergence from the motherly self-nurture on the other side spectrum.

[yournewhaircut]

If you don't know by now,
All things are only preceding.
Don't answer the door
to your heart's beatings.

I find myself holding my breath in an ocean
of bile and make-up.
Hoping the toxic chemicals don't make me grow gills.
Maybe cancer.

My insatiable hunger betrays me,
pulls me toward the cliffs.
Won't stop at the edge.
Or at the space above rock bottom.

Approach is all that will ever be accomplished.