Nerves

[lostfear]

Constant messages travel from
Brain to nerves
Eyes wide shut
At the sight of curves

Novocaine hands, a rush of blood
When the sands turn to mud

Wait; hold on, we’re escalating
At the speed of sound
Can’t explain my pace
A story of sheets unbound

Half way through the photo
Our portrait blurs
Vague and unknown her face
She gets what she deserves

Novocain hands, a rush of blood
When the sands turn to mud

Wait; hold on, we’re escalating
At the speed of sound
Can’t explain my pace
A story of sheets unbound

[apoemtothedead]

The way you spell novocaine is getting on my nerves.

[nbaontcty]

Constant messages travel from
Brain to nerves
Eyes wide shut
At the sight of curves

Novocain hands, a rush of blood
When the sands turn to mud

Wait; hold on, we’re escalating
At the speed of sound
Can’t explain my pace
A story of sheets unbound

Half way through the photo
Our portrait blurs
Vague and unknown her face
She gets what she deserves

Novocain hands, a rush of blood
When the sands turn to mud

Wait; hold on, we’re escalating
At the speed of sound
Can’t explain my pace
A story of sheets unbound


I like your stuff alot!

Its pretty good!

Is your stuff lyrics or poems?

[lostfear]

forgot an e, my bad.

and thank you. some are lyrics, some are poems, but almost all of them wind up in songs at one point or another.

[nbaontcty]

thats chill.

i write my own kinds of stuff.

[Rock]

My problem with it is that the style in which it was written is very terse.

[lostfear]

it's too short, or concise?

that's what the dictionary gives for terse. otherwise I don't know what your talking about .