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turner
10/31/07, 10:27 PM
Your touch will only rush me completely; your favourite words will become so popular inside my heart. If only time could play slow motion for the times your by my side. A glimpse of your eyes shakes such peaceful thoughts and the way your smile can burn the rest.

I’ve seen a thousand hearts break like glass; I’ve held grudge spent some time building back my heart, felt your touch in my dream like the wish, I wished you’d scream, thoughts scattered out like I’ve drowned through time, fate sent a choice in the place of my heart, right in the centre so its safe and tight.

From my heart to your heart, we’ll march on with brave hearts
From my heart to your heart, I’ll bring you my best art
From this heart to that heart, we’ll build such a strong heart

lostfear
10/31/07, 11:30 PM
heart heart heart heart heart heart

yournewhaircut
11/01/07, 03:09 AM
there are some "wtf" moments like "i wish you'd scream" and "shake such peaceful thoughts"

and the use of the word "popular in {the speaker's} heart" makes it sound like a funny translation from another language, or a testiment from a schizophrenic, which might actually go with the "scream" theme.

but i mean these things are kind of charming.

i'm sure if you hammered out some things (not too much though, the amateurish charm is vital), a young lady might be wooed.

brandnew741
11/05/07, 11:19 PM
it reminds me of a cascada song.