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lfdfforever
11/03/07, 03:44 PM
but really this song doesn't make a whole lot of sense


crazy is what i am and it's something i'm truly not
the familiars preach to this
holding on to written words like it's something
they're going to miss
it's the safety that keeps us alike
a false indifference we all gave time to
while we led each other's purposes to guiltful reasons
subtracting things that mattered to everyone here

i hate this part but i love the whole thing
truly a problem for half minded thinkers like me
i need a new gift that's not from you
and i need a new story to tell
led by the greatest slight of hand
filled with nothing but a sad, lonely, alone, smelly, bald, fat old man

what am i? and what am i truly not?
two questions that never seem to die
let's pretend this makes sense
let's never talk again because i've changed my choice
i've become a villain inside of your heart
i really can't make things work
when i can't even thing of a romantic line to write
i'll stop here but i'll never stop watching the fight
from your eyes to mine

a speedo model
11/03/07, 08:13 PM
Yeah, doesn't make a lot of sense, haha. But some lines are quite good, not your best due to it's inconsistent flow and it just not making sense. haha

Good to see you back.

lfdfforever
11/04/07, 01:17 AM
Yeah, doesn't make a lot of sense, haha. But some lines are quite good, not your best due to it's inconsistent flow and it just not making sense. haha

Good to see you back.it feels to good back and it feels good to see you posting in one of my song threads