Untitled. Help with a song title.

[MCSmate]

Can I get help naming this song? I don't have a title yet and don't know what to title it.
Here are the lyrics:

I seem to be taking this a little uncalamly
The world I've fallen on, the world that caught me
Now that you want so much,
I can't seem to be taking enough
Put me away, Why don't you just put me away

[Chorus]
This ground I take fault on
It's not wonder why I live this way
The day in and day out becomes thes same
Take fault on t his ground
(Take fault on this ground)

On the world beneath my feet
I can't believe I'm walking
And I regret falling, though I couldn't choose the intentions
(For the fall) So, put me away,
Why don't you just put me away

[Chorus]
This ground I take fault on
It's not wonder why I live this way
The day in and day out becomes thes same
Take fault on t his ground
(Take fault on this ground)

All I ask is to go back... to where I came from
"I used to live in space, but then somehow I floated down here
This is a strange world from within, truly
Now, take me back to my galaxy far far away"

Put me away, I can't stay
Why don't you just...

[Chorus]
This ground I take fault on
It's not wonder why I live this way
The day in and day out becomes thes same
Take fault on t his ground
(Take fault on this ground)

(Fault on this ground)
This ground, this ground



*The quote in the third verse of this song was written by me and is, if this song was ever put to a melody. hopefully going to be spoken. It doesn't have to be though.
*And this is a rough draft of the song, only because I haven't done any editing to it yet. So you can comment about all you want. I know it is not my best work but I had writers' block for awhile in this is the song that got me out of that.

[June_Bug]

"A Ground Not Made For Walking"

Yea, i've been writting for 6 years so trust my judgement. Is this good enough for you?

[The_kok]

"A Ground Not Made For Walking"

Yea, i've been writting for 6 years so trust my judgement. Is this good enough for you?

really?

[nbaontcty]

Put Me Away

[MCSmate]

Thanks for the ideas... I was thinking "Living On Ground" or something like that.
And I've been writing for a number of years too so your title I_Let_Enfold-Me isn't that great for me

[June_Bug]

Ok, cool, just trying to help.:wave:

[a speedo model]

Fuck, I'm getting depressed. Everyone's apparently been writing for a while with nothing to show for it.

[black rose]

"A Ground Not Made For Walking"

Yea, i've been writting for 6 years so trust my judgement. Is this good enough for you?Coming up with songs titles has nothing to do with how long a person has been writing. I've been writing for about 5, but my song titles suck. Oh, and that one isn't very good.

[MCSmate]

Fuck, I'm getting depressed. Everyone's apparently been writing for a while with nothing to show for it.

I know this isn't my best work and it is rough.
I get what you mean though. I'm one of those people. My writing needs to improve right now.

[a speedo model]

I know this isn't my best work and it is rough.
I get what you mean though. I'm one of those people. My writing needs to improve right now.
Everyone's writing can improve, it's just annoying to come back to this forum and find almost nothing that is very good.

This, however, isn't terrible. It just feels bland, there was nothing that held my interest. And the rhyming felt very forced and just was too typical.

[June_Bug]

Coming up with songs titles has nothing to do with how long a person has been writing. I've been writing for about 5, but my song titles suck. Oh, and that one isn't very good.

Yea, I thought I should throw that in there so she wouldn't feel like so ass who doesn't know a thing about writting is trying to say something like that. So, what did you come up with?

[black rose]

I don't know a thing about writting either. Care to explain?

I love spelling/grammar jokes

Anyways, I didn't come up with a song title. It's not my job and I'll admit it: I suck at naming songs. Woohoo.